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His Eyes, His Smile, His Whip
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Owlwhisper PM
A poem about a person being whipped
Rated: Fiction T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Poetry - Words: 74 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10-13-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3065242
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I stare into his eyes

Brown, like mud

Hard, like iron

Cold, like ice.

He smiles

So menacingly,

So cruelly,

So evilly .

He holds a whip

Leather with silver studs shining

Like stars

He brings it above his head

A silhouette against the blazing sun

And finally brings it down

Slicing through the air to meet

My uncovered flesh.

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