
Liz here Just a poem I thought I'd like to publish. I'd love to get some feedback on it. Thanks.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Horror/Poetry - Words: 110 - Published: 10-18-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3066629
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Red rusty tears trickle from her sobbing slits
Blurry eyes gaping into the darkness
crimson drying on her lashes
The smells of flesh festering breathe from her lips
Brittle fingers broken like a pile of matchsticks
broken by his sadistic kicks
Tucked inside a box
Sealed away from sunlight
The flower withered away and turned to rock
She wasted away
malnourished
starving
desperate
Unable to climb out from her prison
The smog of misery clouded her vision
Wasting away
her body formed like clay
in his hands of sin
She cried as he mocked her
that she would never win
Not until death came and took pity
Was the flower relinquished from the dark cellar
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