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Trouble in Candyland
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Princess Adeline PM
Join Allie, Louisa, and Katrina as they try to save Candyland from the evil ants. Without Candyland, there will be no more candy...forever... (This was a story that I made because I was so bored. It kinda stinks...so...ENJOY?
Rated: Fiction K - English - Friendship/Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 420 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-08-12 - Published: 10-20-12 - id: 3067328
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A/N: PM me if this stinks. I kinda think it does. I was so bored, so I made this.

"Wait, what was that?" I asked. It moved again, and out sprang a bright light which tickled me. "Is it a fairy?" Louisa asked. "Er, I don't think so..." Allie replied. "I am Julianna! I have come from the Fairy Queen herself, who hereby calls the attention of Katrina, Louisa, and Alanna." She said. So it was a fairy. Allie cringed. She hated her real name. We all ran away at the age of 11, and did I mention we all have the same birthdays? We were now 15. "Wait, what? Fairies are real?" Allie asked. "Well, duh." Julianna replied. "Wait—did we even agree to go?" I asked Julianna. "Um, no." and with a wave of her hand, we fell into the ground. We woke up to a magnificent sight. There were chocolate fountains, marshmallow plants, and many other yummy tasting things. We heard a girl clear her throat.

"Girls, you should probably meet Queen Lollipop."

We all laughed, which was a really, really big mistake. "Who dares laugh at my daughter!?" a booming voice exclaimed. Louisa, the funny and sarcastic one, laughed really hard and said, "Um, we dare laugh because what kind of a name is Lollipop?"

That was an extremely horrible mistake on our part, aside from laughing at Queen Lollipop's name. "Girls," Julianna whispered. "Don't dare anger King Licorice! He will blast you to shreds! I'm completely sure!"

"King Licorice? Queen Lollipop? What is this? Candyland?" Louisa said sarcastically.

"Well, it might be really funny…HAHAHAHA! Oh my gosh! Daddy Licorice does not understand teenagers like you and me!" she laughed. We were already rolling in the floor laughing, until Allie became face to face with her. It was Queen Lollipop.

A/N: Yeah, ok so flames are okay, because, #1 it's still a review, and #2 this story stinks. So bye!

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