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Behind Closed Doors
Author: OhMyLeppy  PM
The story is told from the POV of a small child, who's father is angry with his mother and goes too far. I would really appreciate a beta reader, please. I was mainly writing this so I could practice my use of repetition. P.S Reviews are always nice!
Rated: Fiction T - English - Poetry/Family - Words: 177 - Published: 10-25-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3068483
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Don't ask, just don't. I will probably write more happy stories in the future. The poem is told as a small child, who's father is angry. The POV changes in the last paragraph to the father's.
I would really appreciate a beta reader!
Behind my door, through the wall
My papa yells at my mama
He's angry at her, but I don't know why
Behind my door, through the wall
My papa hits my mama
He's angry at her, but I don't know why.
Behind my door, through the wall
My papa throws my mama
He's angry at her, but I don't know why.
Behind my door, through the wall
My mana bleeds because of my papa
He's angry at her, but I don't know why.
Behind my door, through the wall
My papa holds my mama
He's not angry at her, but I still don't know why.
Behind my door, through the wall
My papa cries for my mama
He's angry at himself, not her, and now he knows why.
Behind my child's door, through the wall
I hear him cry for his mama
Who he will miss, because know it's too late.
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