
poetry; free verse. A bit of a peek into something more personal.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry - Words: 112 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-18-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3075299
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she counted the bites
and swallowed the dust
that tasted of sandpaper
and rotten milk.
it lingers on her tongue;
the breakfast she was supposed
to eat
that she can smell
with the sharpest sense.
when was the last time
she ate?
she can't remember
and doesn't think it matters
as she wobbles on her feet
and smiles a little bit wider;
she can feel the pounds
slipping off her frame
and floating far away
like wishes in the wind.
A/N: This is a bit personal, but I'd still like a critique or even just a review saying whatever. Let me know how this one went down? :)
~Chari
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