
| One Day
Author: Rattle A poem consisting of 6 stanzas. Is about the countryside and the city. My first attempt at proper poetry. Can not think how else to summarize a poem! please give it a try. Please review and help me!
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry - Words: 309 - Published: 11-27-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3078073
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Hi, I have only ever published fan fiction. I'm really nervous about publishing this, please review and say what you think/how to improve!
One day
Watching the leaves fall to the ground
I listen to that beautiful sound
Whispering trees
Scurrying rabbits
Hurrying hares
As I look into the distance
The last apple on that old tree
Falls to the ground with a gentle thud
I know that one day no one will see what I see
A sudden gust of wind makes me shiver
I listen to
The bubbling river
The distant sheep
The gabbling geese
That last apple rolls with the wind
I know that one day no one will hear what I hear
Slowly walking down the moor
I feel that last sunshine fade away
Birds circle the sky searching for prey
As I listen to
Rustling leaves
Deer's that dart away
The snap of conkers
And as the wind gets stronger
The apple blows further
Winter is drawing in
I know that one day no one will feel what I feel
Hills and trees are swept away
For town and city
Tall buildings tower high
It is such a pity
Smoke and light
It isn't right
Then you will hear
Screams and shouts
Rattles and battles
Building sites
And a lot fights
I know what you will hear
And that I fear
When city is here
You will see
Bright lights
People full of spite
Dark alleyways
Grim cafes
I know what you will see
And that scares me
Walking through the woods
I listen to the beautiful sounds
Whispering trees
Scurrying rabbits
Hurrying hares
The bubbling river
The distant sheep
The gabbling geese
Rustling leaves
Deer's that dart away
The snap of conkers
One day this will no longer be here
And for that
I quietly shed a tear
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