
| Depression Unleashed
Author: daughter of Athena and Apollo Hidden withen these words is my soul, find it if you dare. A collection of my sad poems. These will make you sad, but I really want advice on writing so pretty please R & R. Chapter 3 is the best so far, in my opinion.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 3 - Words: 898 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 12-25-12 - Published: 12-12-12 - id: 3082457
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Written: Sometime in October, 2012
Hi, so I'm a seriously deep person, and with that comes deep stuff. Poems are like my way of... venting I guess. I feel like a totally different person when I write these, and I have to assume I'm writing as the real me, without all the masks I wear at school. Some of these poems are real, others haven't happened to me personally. I chose to give you this one because I don't trust you with my soul quite yet.
Sounds echo
Through the hearts
Of the couple
Love flowing
In the harmonious duet
Peace and passion
Balanced perfectly
Never missing a beat
The couple enjoys their time together
Flowing as one
But he must leave
Off to the dark
Silver gleams as guns
Are pulled back
The beat now stomps
Under many combat boots
War rages
Sounds echo
Breaths shallow
The duet turns into a solo
Broken, airy, distorted
She joins him by choice
Now the duet sings
With the angels
If anyone's got any name suggestions that'd be nice. Review please, and don't be like the rest of the world that takes stuff for granted. This tookme time, the least you could do if you enjoyed is review it and give me some of your time.
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