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This haiku is the longest one I've written. It could be better, please give me some constructive criticism. I worked really hard on it. Oh! It's about a samurai who fights through out the night and meets a sad fate...
Rated: Fiction T - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Words: 95 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-13-12 - id: 3082717
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Sliver is the moon
Stained is the ground below
Darkened is the night
Katana in hand
She will defend her homeland
Fighting for honor
The stream will sing
As the old bamboo whispers
The white flag is torn
For her pride will win
Samurai will stand tonight
And defend Japan
Dancing gracefully
They still end up on the ground
The cherry blossoms
A graceful dance is
On the battlefield tonight
It is a facade
For Samurai
Swings her blade viciously
Striking down the evil
Painted with orange
The sunrise and day begin
Samurai is none...
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