
A poem I wrote with my friend Ditzygirly22 about friendship and a song. Im very proud of this piece, so please review :)
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Words: 336 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-26-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3086325
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Remember that silly old song?
Ninety-nine bottles
Of beer on wall
Remember our useless
Childlike games
Before the two of us grew tall
And forgot each others names
When we could do no wrong
And before we knew the meaning
Of that silly old song
Because now when i sing it aloud
I think of our vow
To the times we said best friends forever
But now all I hear is
Never
Cause in my heart
I know better than to think
Its only a few verses
Talking about walls
And mere beer
It seems to me
That every new line
And every bottle taken
Is just a passage of time
Every bottle down
is just a piece of us breaking
And the small talk we have now
Is only us faking
Slowly but surely
Soft and steady
Everything we once had
Begins to disappear
In front of our very own eyes;
And Now that i think about it
Our friendship only last
On a few more lines
Ten more bottles of beer
Left on the wall
And now I'm left to wonder
Do you even care at all?
Take one down
Pass it around
Nine bottles of beer on the wall
Take one down
And Your still no where to be found
Eight
Tell me,
Why did we wait
Seven bottles remain
And we only have pain
Now were left with six
And i know there's no easy fix
Something so broken
Is like being dead when your still alive
And now were left with five
Theres no going back to what we had before
So now we have four
How could you do this to me?
Because you did
Our bottles only number three
And now I ask
How will I forgive you
When were left with only two
Take one down
Pass it around
One bottle of beer on the wall
Theres only one
And now were done
Now all we have left
Is an empty shelf
And we can only blame ourselves
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