hi! this is my first try at strait erotica so please dont go to hard on me... im trying to get some feedback on my stories because i want to become a better writer. this is a vary short story... its pure smut. so if you dont like that dont read it! hoe you like it

I am on all 4s and my hands are tied together infront of me. I am attached to a leash and the person holding the leash is licking his lips as he stares down at his work. The leash itself is attached to a black leather collar and I am naked other then that small strip of leather around my neck. I am looking down at the floor by his feet because I am trying my best to hide the deep blush that is staining my face but he quickly stops my efforts by yanking lightly on the leash bringing my face up and causing my eyes to focus on him as my blush deepens. He shakes his head lightly and smirks. "no… no hiding that pretty face of yours…" as he said that I curled my fingers around the ropes binding my hands together and bit my lip. He wrapped his end of the leash around his hand and pulled it so that I would have to stand on my knees to not be choked. He knelt on one knee and traced his pointer finger down my cheek and then farther down to my neck making me bite my lip a bit harder. He stops at my collar bone and then he leans his head down to my ear and whispers, "your so sexy…" then he licks my ear making me moan softly and his finger started trailing down my chest and he smirks as he traces the spot right above my breast making me moan softly again. He pulls at the leash again and grins as he teasingly traces around my breast and blows hot air on the shell of my ear making me shiver and clutch the ropes around my wrist to stop from trembling. "you like that don't you…" he whispers huskily against my neck right above the pulse point making my eyes go half lidded. "y-yes…" I moan softly. He smiles and kisses the pulse point at my neck as he lets his finger tease at my nipple making me gasp and bite my lip in an atempt to hold back my moans. He starts to suck on my neck and lightly roll my nipple in his fingers making me tremble and moan with pleasure. He pulls off my neck and smirks seeing the hicky he left, he breaths warm air over it and bites it softly making me squeak cutely. He nibbles on the sensitive skin and I cant hold back a low groan of pleasure as I close my eyes. "NNnngg.." I blush deeply hearing myself and he starts trailing kisses down my shoulder and across my chest. He doesn't stop messing with my nipple as he kisses all the way to my other nipple and he trails his tongue on my breast. He then twirls his tongue around my nipple making my back arch slightly. I let another moan slip past my lips and I bit my bottom lip trying to stop the noises. He started to suck on my nipple without stopping the torcher of the other one and he smirks as I moan sorta loud. "ahh… n-nick…" I moan as I let my jawfall slack and I could feel him grin. He pulled off and then he latched onto the other nipple biting it lightly this time illiciting a small yelp from me. After he sucks on it for about a minute he pulls off and smirks up at me. "your sensitive… " he whispers against my skin then kisses it smiling. I groan softly and nod looking at him. "y-ya in am… im a virgin duh…" I smirk lightly and he pulls the leash so the I fall on my ass and I he sits in between my spread legs. "mmm… that got you excited…. Look how wet you are…" he teases and leans down kissing up my thigh and my breath hitches. My hands are still bound and I feel vulnrable as he inches closer. He kisses up my pelvic bone and across my waist line teasing me and making me moan softly. He smirks as he licks the rim of my belly botton and I shiver and moan as he dips his tongue in. "your belly is so cute… " he murmers against my skin as he kisses my belly smiling. I blush deeply and bite my lip embarrassed, I want to cover my face but my hands are bound and he wont let me move my head so I cant and I feel licks down my stomach to my now dripping sex and he smirks as he licks it teasingly. I gasp and grip at the ropes around my wrists and I instinctuallly spread my legs a bit farther apart. He lays down inbetween my legs and licks me a bit deeper making me tilt my head up and moan his name into the air. "ahh…nick… mm" I bit my lip to muffle the moans but it doesn't work as he starts to swirl his tongue, making all thoughts I had of trying to stay quite take a flying leap out of my brain. He smirks and pulls his tongue out, he sits up on his knees and slowly unzips his skinny jeans making sure I hear the sound and I groan softly biting my lip to the point of pain. He pulls at my leash and I sit up, as I sit up I come face to face with his cock and I gulp lightly looking at it. It was rock hard and throbing a bit. He pulled at my leash making me come closer to it and he smirks. "be a good little kitty and suck…" I gulp and I open my mouth a bit. I slowly and experimentaly lick the tip and I am encuraged to continue by his small groan. It didn't taste bad so I licked from the base to the tip testing its flavor a bit more. I decided it tasted pretty good so I wrapped my lips around the tip and started to suck on his length still a bit nervous. I could tell he was getting impaitiant so I sighed opening my throat up and I went as far down on him as I could without gagging witch was barely haalf of him. He pulled at my leash every time I went down on him and it made me take just a bit more of him in every time he did he wrapped his fingers in my hair and started to thrust back and forth into my mouth and I let him do what he pleased as I closed my eyes, concentrating on keeping my breathing normal and on sucking. He groaned and pushed his cock deep into my throat making me gag but neither of us really cared as he tilted his head up slightly as a small blush tainted his cheeks. I could tell he was about to cum so I purposfully swallowed around him and opened my throat up. He let out a small groan of my name as he came down my throat. It was salty and I swallowed as much of it as I could and what I couldn't swallow dripped down my chin and neck. He pulled out and he kept his fingers wrapped in my hair as he smirked. "your throat feels great…" I blushed deeply and he pulled me into a standing position by my leash. He pushed me onto the bed and he untied my hands then he held them together above my head. He then held my legs open with his knees. He smirks as he leaned down to my ear and he whispers. "this is gonna hurt…" after that small warning he thrust himself into me and I screamed as I arched into him. A few tears left my eyes as my virginity was taken and I had blood dripping down my thigh. He started to thrust in and out of me slowly and I groaned, the pain quickly being replaced by pleasure. He kept my hands pinned above my head as he started to pound into me making me moan loudly and shamlessly. "ahh… mmm n-nick ahh… " he smirks and doesn't slow down or ease up. I spread my legs and moan loving how rough hes being and he leas his head down and kisses my lips tenderly witch was a huge conrast to how he was fucking me at the moment. I kissed back and moaned into his mouth as he changed his angle. The new angle caused him to abuse my g-spot repeatedly. He slipped his tongue into my mouth when I moaned and he teased my tongue with his as he smirked slowling down a bit with his thrusting. He left my mouth and trailed kisses down my neck and sucked on the kicky he gave me. I moaned and arced my back into him as my body shook from the force of my orgasm. I screamed his name as I came and he bit down on my hicky. "ahhh n-nicky…." He moaned my name into my ear as he came into me and I layed under him panting hard, drool dripping down my chin as he kissed me onw more time. He pulled out of my and cuddled to my side letting my hands go. He nuzzled my side and smiled like a kitty. "that was fun…" I nod and catch my breath smiling. "ya it was… im tired now…" I yawn and cuddle with him. We fall asleep cuddling and I still have the leash on when we wake up the next morning.