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Last Thoughts
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Poem written while watching Suzie Q.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Words: 72 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 01-14-13 - Status: Complete - id: 3092080
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One of two poems that i wrote while watching an old movie from the 90's titled "Suzie Q." This was one of my submissions to the workshops for my Creative writing class last semester.

Last thoughts

I long for your smile,

to here your voice.

The water fills my lungs.

Things becoming foggy.

Are you still there?

As my last breath leaves,

Am I dying?

Did I make a wrong choice?

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