
| Last Thoughts
Author: konekotsukino Poem written while watching Suzie Q.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Words: 72 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 01-14-13 - Status: Complete - id: 3092080
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One of two poems that i wrote while watching an old movie from the 90's titled "Suzie Q." This was one of my submissions to the workshops for my Creative writing class last semester.
Last thoughts
I long for your smile,
to here your voice.
The water fills my lungs.
Things becoming foggy.
Are you still there?
As my last breath leaves,
Am I dying?
Did I make a wrong choice?
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