
Short Story for my CRWR class. The title should tell you everything you need to know, it shouldn't be too long. (Hence short). If you could read/review it with an eye for constructive criticism. I would greatly appreciate it. And who knows? A digital bunny might be in your future...
Rated: Fiction T - English - Suspense/Horror - Chapters: 6 - Words: 1,846 - Reviews: 8 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 01-31-13 - Published: 01-16-13 - id: 3092562
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(Transcript from a mini voice recorder)
May 2nd, 2023
(clattering) (static)
[voice 1]
"Well lookee what we have here. A solo act, huh?"
[voice 2]
"Please, don't hurt me. Take all my food, take anything just let me go, please."
[voice 1]
"Sure, sure. Though it don't seem like you got much stuff worth takin', pardner."
[voice 2]
"Please, take whatever you want. Just let me go."
[voice 3]
"I say kill 'em. 'Could be infected. We'd really be doin' 'im a favor."
[voice 2]
"No! I'm not. I'm not! I swear."
[voice 1]
"Oh really? And how do we know that for sure?"
[voice 2]
"I swear! I-I I've been tested! I've been cleared by the government!"
[voice 1]
"What? You got papers or sumthing? Naw, I don't trust ya."
[voice 3]
"Just kill 'em already! We gotta get movin' soon if we're gonna make it to D.C. By tomorrow."
[voice 2]
"You can't go to D.C.!"
[voice 1]
"Oh really? And why's that?"
[voice 2]
"The city is full of them. If you go there, you'll die."
[voice 1]
"And where's your proof of that, boy-oh?"
[voice 2]
"We were being shipped to the country. They told us that the less people there were, the safer you were."
[voice 3]
"They. The government. They're the cause of this mess, y'know. I ain't trustin' him, let alone them.
[voice 1]
"Y'know what? (spitting sound) Imma let you go."
[voice 3]
"Really?"
[voice 1]
"Yeah, why waste the bullet? We got bigger fish to fry than this government scum."
[voice 2]
"Thank you! Thank you so much."
[voice 1]
"Ah, ah, ah. First, hand over your supplies."
[voice 2]
"Take it! Take everything, I don't care."
[voice 1]
"Good."
(more rustling sounds)
[voice 1]
"You can keep your voice recorder. That's not gonna be much help to anybody anymore, heh heh heh."
[voice 2]
"Thank you!"
[voice 3]
"Yeah, yeah. Have fun buddy. And don't let us see you again. We'll kill ya."
(click)
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