
My goal is to write as many poems as possible and get some positive feedback (which didn't happen due to a certain asshole saying how bad my poems were in like...4 reviews). Since this is becoming another one of my hobbies, I've kind of decided to maybe be a poet one day.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Humor - Chapters: 10 - Words: 1,813 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 06-08-13 - Published: 01-25-13 - id: 3095445
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Sweets
Sweets are a girl's best friend
If you're having a bad or even a crappy day
Sweets will make that frown go upside down
Sweets
My love for it is like a melody
Because even though it's not healthy
It has become one with my body
Sweets
Sweets leave a good taste in your mouth
Biting into my Hershey Bar
The warm, delicious, sweet, mouth-watering chocolate
Melts onto my tongue
Sweets
Sweets soak up our very beings
Like a sponge in the water
Without it
Life would be a barren field
Plain and simple but really boring
Sweets
Sweets are something that I can come home to
With the brief hours and disdainful weeks
I have a chocolate bar waiting for me
Right there in the fridge
Sweets
Sweets are what females describe 'amazing'
For t'was practically made for us
Us women in the world
Sweets
Sweets are great things to eat
Because they're more powerful than rays
They're more inspiring than plays
And it's my money that pays
The money to buy the damn sweets
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