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The story Of Stripes

Chapter 1

Late Cretaceous Period

Tryannosaurus nesting grounds

"This is where My story Begins. My nest is the closest mound to the bolder to make sure the eggs didn't get too warm."

Sunlight filled my site as I made my way out of my egg and the nest. I looked around, blinking as I saw my brothers and sisters. My brothers were generally different shades of green with some markings all over their body. My sisters, however, were different shades of grey which was tinted green. All of their eyes range from blues to greens and to yellowish orange.

"I was different from my brothers and sisters. Instead of being green or grey, I was a dark red color with a tanish under belly and had black stripes going down my snout and over both of my eyes. My eyes were a sunset orange."

The first born was Fang, a male. He was dark green with black markings over his head, body and tail. He had pale blue eyes.

The next was Whitetip, a female. She was a greyish brown with white on the tip of her tail. She had forest green eyes.

The third was also a female named brown eyes. She was a dark grey with a greenish tint. She had Brown eyes and has faded markings along her back.

Then, there was me, Stripes, the runt. I chirped, seeing mother.

She was a dusty brown with a small, grey spot on her snout.

She looked over us before nuzzling us one at a time. She then lift her head and roared up into the sky. Thats when my father appeared. He was a light green with black markings all over. He looked over us one by one and nudged us gently.

I stumbled out of the nest before catching my footing.

Fang stared up at father before looking over at me. He walked over and sniffed me before nudging me a bit hard, making me fall on my side, making me squeak in surprise. He snorted, turning around and walking to the others. I got up and looked down. Already I was getting picked on by the eldest. I turned and decided to explore. Most of the nests were hatching or already hatched.

I chirped whenever I passed the other members but they only ignored me. I went back to my nest and saw my brothers and sisters playing around but I stayed well away. I laid down and just watched.

Mother came over and layed down beside me. I looked up at her and chirped before moving closer and nuzzling her jaw. Father layed down on the other side of me a few moments after. They both fell asleep soon after. I soon got bored and stood and stared to chase a random insect.

I kept trying to catch it until I slammed into something. I blinked and shook my head and got up. I looked up to what I ran into. It was an older male T-rex, about two years old, I came up to just below his knee. He was dark green with redish stripes and markings down his back and face and he had orangish eyes.

"This is my older brother from one of mother's previous clutches. He was named Jumper because he would always jump when he was little."

He leaned down and sniffed me before nuzzling me. I chirped happily and nuzzled him back.

The sun was setting before long and we all retired to our respective nests. I walked over to mine and when Fang saw me, he growled at me and I stopped. He seemed to be happy with that and layed down with our other siblings. I looked down and thats when I felt something nudged me from behind.

I turned around and saw that it was Jumper. He moved his head to the side, signaling me to follow him and start to walk and I followed. He layed down with others his age group and looked at me. He looked down at his side and then looked back at me and I understood the message.

I walked over and layed down beside him, against his side.

My eyes closed and I fell asleep

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