
An attempt at a more 'visual' piece. Very short, another older piece. R&R?
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry/Family - Words: 79 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 02-05-13 - Status: Complete - id: 3098565
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Good night
Gaze upon the cascading falls as the sun sets beyond the hills,
Listen to the calls of the wilderness as they bid their kin good night,
Taste the pure, clear water as you drink from the crystal clear stream,
Smell the freshly churned soil as you walk towards your den,
Feel the warmth of your family as you curl up to them and say good night.
Not my favorite work, but it turned out all right. Comments?
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