
| Children at Play - So far
Author: aidan.mcguire.397 A tragedy in a 1980's Cold war dystopian future. I started this project a few days ago. Please, tell me any input or suggestions for anything that you may have!
Rated: Fiction T - English - Crime/Sci-Fi - Words: 3,510 - Published: 03-03-13 - id: 3105586
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CHILDREN AT PLAY
A tragedy in a 1980's Cold War dystopian future.
EXT. BEACH - NIGHT
Starry night way off, though the haze blocks them out directly above. Waves, suds, a large clump of see weed down the beach.
A booming cu-tunk-clang! way out to sea, and then an upward explosion follows, then dies down calmly. Again. Syndicated. Controlled.
A pick up truck pulls in right where the water begins, and TWO MEN jump out. They pull the tarp off the flatbed and drag out a body wrapped in a bed spread. The back of the head smacks against the sand.
They're wearing masks. They drag the body into the water, and toss it. Seeing the body get washed back to shore, one man wattles in and begins to push the body away.
Another explosion. Farther off. To the left. Far enough to be lower behind the curve of the earth.
The man goes in to his waist, then lets out one final push. The body gets dragged underwater by a wave, then gets pushed out the other side. The man comes back.
They both get back in the truck and drive off silently.
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INT. TRUCK - NIGHT
The two men sit silently. The passenger pulls off his mask. The driver glances over, and pulls off his. He tosses it in the back.
He sighs.
KYLE
What do we do with the baby?
WILLARD
I don't know, Kyle.
KYLE
It's still alive.
WILLARD
I know.
KYLE
We could just go back. Put it in the ocean.
WILLARD
Don't talk 'bout drowning baby's, man.
KYLE
It'd be the easiest thing to do.
WILLARD
Sure, it'd be easy, but I don't want to do that.
KYLE
You don't want to make your job easier for yourself?
WILLARD
No, I just don't want to be drownin' any babies.
KYLE
What do you suppose then?
WILLARD
I don't know. Let's just- go back to town. Jack'll tell us.
KYLE
(Shrugs)
Alright.
They don't look at each other. Kyle keeps driving.
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EXT. 7TH STREET - CLOUDY AFTERNOON
"The Ability to Swing" by Thomas Dolby.
Wide streets, traffic jam on one side. double cinder-block walls cutting off each road. Cars from the 1980's pimped out just a bit to make them look futuristic. Some rusting, old and used, and others as sleek, shining sports cars right out of display.
Litter on the sidewalks. Most pedestrians walking as if they were sick or ready to pull a knife. Dilapidated buildings to varying extents. As you look farther into the background, down the city strip, the buildings get taller and taller, until mega-complexes reach up through the clouds and into the heavens.
A Boeing taking off in the distance. It wraps around the skyscrapers, then keeps ascending.
On the right side of the road, a construction project with a crane and multiple jack hammers clanking away.
We start off from the rooftops, then pan down to the project; workers wearing orange vests, most buff, most harrier than apes. One in particular, ALAN, is only just slim, and working hard on a jackhammer. 30's, sunken eyes, straight, kind of long hair jetting off to the side as it hangs over his forehead.
We come to his face. He looks out across the street to nothing.
Cars honk. Alan wipes his forehead.
A group of bikers to Alan's left, down the road at the intersection, drift right into his street. Engines roar. The bikers each get out a whacking object of sorts and go in a straight line down the left of the road. They whack at the car windows.
The other construction workers turn. One, DONAVIN, tips his hat backwards and shows off his top row of bad teeth.
Most of the bikers pass through safely until a MAN steps out of his badly beaten car with a revolver in hand, and fires at the back biker.
The biker's head shoots forward with an explosion of blood and falls to the right, limp. His neck takes out a side mirror with a shatter. He completely falls. His head gets stopped with a collision of his neck and a tire.
The bikers at the next intersection drift to a stop and looks at the man.
The man flips them off.
The bikers take off again, down the right street, out of sight.
The man angrily pounds the hood of his car. Others step out.
MAN
Freakin' Christ, I just made ten payments on this thing!
Back to the workers.
Alan casually looks back to Donavin, who tilts his head. Donavin smirks. Alan gives him a look.
DONAVIN
What? That was cool.
ALAN
Seeing people die is cool to you?
DONAVIN
I don't know, it's cool on TV. What can you do except get entertained by it?
Gruff and old, a voice barks at them off screen.
VOICE
What the hell are you guys doing!? Get back to work, now! We got a deadline!
They all get back to work.
Alan looks up to the sky. A police helicopter flies overhead, disappearing behind the rooftop boundaries. It head's East.
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EXT. ALAN'S APARTMENT BUILDING - CLOUDY AFTERNOON
Also dilapidated. Wooden planks used in some parts of the outer wall to seal it up. Brown bricks. Ten stories high. No cars except a wheeless one with its windows smashed out and seating taken in the background. The mega-complexes miles away, angels living it up on the roof pools.
No people around. Other smaller shops down the streets.
A Taxi pulls up to the building, and Alan steps out, pays the driver, and walks in the building.
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INT. ALAN'S APARTMENT BUILDING - CLOUDY AFTERNOON
A single desk to the right, then a hallway that banks to an elevator and a utility closet.
No one at the desk. He looks over to talk to the usually-there manager.
ALAN
Okay...
He reaches the elevator, steps in, pushes a button, and leans back against the wall, tapping the metal railings.
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INT. ALAN'S APARTMENT - CLOUDY AFTERNOON
Dark. Only the bleak sun gives light through the drapes.
A small room as you walk in, the living room, to the wall is the kitchen; a long strip, very small. A bedroom door to the back of the living room.
A brick TV on a cabinet. A couch, a chair, table, hanging light with multi-colored glass like a dress.
Plants. Dying.
Alan walks in and locks the door.
ALAN
Hey baby!
He takes off his jacket. Lays it on the floor.
ALAN (CONT.)
Did you see th-...
He enters the living room. Blood on the wall above the couch. Some more on the top headrest. A towel, bloodstained, on the couch.
Alan stops, shakes, mouth opens a little bit, hesitates.
ALAN
Uh, Loren?
He knows no one will answer.
He inches into the living room, then leaps for the kitchen.
He jumps on top of a counter, opens a cupboard, and frantically searches aimlessly through the top shelf.
Clinging and clanging of pots and pans. He grabs a pocket pistol and jumps down.
He peaks his head out to the living room. Nothing new. Silence.
He raises his gun, and tip toes to the bedroom.
He's shaking. He's not scared to find someone there to shoot him. He's just afraid to see someone dead instead.
Uses his index finger to creak the door open.
Walks in, gun still raised.
On the bed, more blood, not as much as he expected. Then a note with newspaper clippings for letters. He looks over to the crib; no blood, but no baby either.
He reads the note.
NOTE
Mr. Wayne, you've been putting off your payments for too long now. You know how much you owe, and you know the interest rate. Do the math. You know where we are. Pay us by 7:00 P.M. tomorrow or you won't get your baby or wife back. We won't specify if they are okay, injured, or deceased. We never hoped to operate like this, but you left us without options. Simply business.
Alan sweats. He drops the note. It flutters peacefully down to the bed.
He sits upon the bed, head in his hands, crying.
ALAN
What is this...?
Looks up at the crib. Still no baby. Face back in his hands.
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EXT. HORSE RACE TRACK - CLOUDY AFTERNOON
A starter's pistol fires. The gun smoke quickly gets sweeped away.
The gates open. Horses with different colored saddles and matching, elegant blanket-like fabrics drooped over the horses back. The JOCKEYS stand up, their feet getting pushed and dragged up and down in the stirrup.
The audience cheers. Mainly rich folk spending their money without a single thought.
A few men, TOADVINE, WALLACE, JACKY, and OSWALD, sit coolly in their seats. Wearing suits and ties. Oswald leans against a pillar, head cocked.
Toadvine: Grey suit, rolling a mint in his mouth, full head of brown hair, 30's.
Wallace: 40's, John McClane styled hair in a black suit and matching tie. We see a pistol tucked in his pants. A badge on his suit pocket.
JACKY: The youngest, an unhealthy hunch, resting his elbows at the end of his knees, looking inventively at the race. Grey suit.
Oswald: A crooked nose, hands in his pockets, a Tom Shelleck mustache. No suit, a stylish vest with a shoulder-holstered pistol. Bushy eyebrows.
The horses gallop around the track.
TOADVINE
Looks like you're out of luck.
JACKY
(Without looking back)
We'll see. I think we can all agree on Wallace.
WALLACE
Me? No. I'm in second.
OSWALD
And I'm in first.
JACKY
But that's expected with you, Oswald. You always seem to win.
OSWALD
There's no illusion about it, it just happens.
JACKY
Whatever. It's only the first lap anyway.
Oswald bounces once on the pillar.
WALLACE
How many horses do you think will fall?
OSWALD
Two.
JACKY
None.
TOADVINE
I don't know, one.
WALLACE
Guys want to bet on it?
TOADVINE
How much money we got?
WALLACE
$4,000. Each.
OSWALD
I'll bet $800
Wallace takes four fat stacks of bills out of his inner suit pockets, and lays them flat on the bench next to him.
WALLACE
Take out $800.
TOADVINE
What are you betting on, Wallace?
WALLACE
I'ma say three. See what happens.
OSWALD
No way there'll be three downs.
WALLACE
We'll see. There were five that one time.
OSWALD
That's because it was raining and muddy.
WALLACE
It's cloudy now, maybe god will bring down some holy rain or something to help me win.
JACKY
Yeah, we'll see.
TOADVINE
Why does Wallace have all of our money?
WALLACE
Because I'm the most responsible here, shithead. And I'm not the one who goes and buys a fucking Lamborghini after his first pay check.
OSWALD
Hey, that doesn't apply to me!
WALLACE
You're right, it applies to Toadvine.
JACKY
Me neither!
WALLACE
That's right.
JACKY
Then why can't we have our money?
WALLACE
I'm still the most responsible one here.
JACKY
Whatever. Don't go spendin' our money behind our backs, okay?
WALLACE
I won't, I'm responsible.
JACKY
Fine.
A horse trips itself with another horse. One horse falls forward and snaps its neck, neighing, and the jockey flies off to the side. The other horse just stops and falls on it's side. The jockey of that horse LEAPS off and rolls into the green center of the track, over the boundaries.
OSWALD
That was fast. Jacky, looks like you're out of the race.
JACKY
Dammit! Toadvine, can I hang at your apartment this week? That was my rent.
TOADVINE
Seriously!? You do this every time you fuck up, which is all the time.
JACKY
What can I say, the only way to truly live is to take risks.
WALLACE
You can say that when the stakes are higher and they actually mean something. You can't pull that card in middle-ground like this.
JACKY
You aren't even involved in this.
WALLACE
I'm your superiority. I'm always involved.
JACKY
This sucks.
WALLACE
Cool it. I just need two more.
JACKY
Why'da bet so fucking high if I can't take risks?
WALLACE
Because I'm still going to have my home if I lose. And my car. I won't lose anything. I make sure it's luxury money I'm betting all the time before I'm doin' it.
TWO BOYS a few roes down and off to the side lay many bills in between each other on the bench. They're laughing, and one kid slaps his bills down like cards.
Wallace leans towards them, and raises his voice.
WALLACE
Hey kids! What do you think your doing?
BOY 1
Huh?
WALLACE
You two, what are you doing?
BOY 1
Makin' some dough off of each other, is all.
WALLACE
"Dough?" You shouldn't be betten' that kind of cash this young. You should be- betting legos, or-
Toadvine, Jacky and Oswald chuckle.
WALLACE (CONT.)
-or pretzels, crackers, you know?
BOY 2
Why don't you mind your own business, mister?
WALLACE
(Tugs on his badge)
I believe you should listen to me and take my advice, k kiddo?
BOY 1
Fuck off!
OSWALD
(Angry, steps away from the pillar)
Hey, you little shits! You listen to this man, and you listen damn good or I'll slit your fucking throats! Finding out where you live isn't even a problem!
The boys go pale, divide the stack of money evenly, return each's share, and turn away.
Oswald grins, and Toadvine fist bumps him, chuckling. He leans back on the pillar.
OSWALD
Not the most conventional way to go about, but it works.
WALLACE
Yeah.
A triple beep, and Oswald glares down at a pager. We don''t see what it says.
OSWALD
(Bored)
Uh oh.
WALLACE
What?
OSWALD
Got a 207.
(moans)
Again...
JACKY
It's always a 207!
TOADVINE
Shut up Jacky! You've only been on the force two months, you can't say it's ALWAYS a murder.
JACKY
It's always a murder in the papers since I was a kid.
WALLACE
Are you two this dense? That's not even a murder! How do you not know this? Well-
(gets up)
-we can read about this in the papers tomorrow, k?
TOADVINE
Yeah, sure.
JACKY
I don't care.
OSWALD
Because you lost the fucking bet...
The two get up and walk away with Wallace, and Oswald bounces off the pillar and follows off screen.
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EXT. ALAN'S APARTMENT BUILDING - CLOUDY AFTERNOON
It's raining slightly.
A few other police cruisers parked outside. Clouds being sliced by the mega-complexes like butter.
They pull up in a boxy, 80's squad car. They all step out, and Wallace holds his hand out, and lets the rain fall into his palm.
He smiles at it.
WALLACE
Maybe I'm still in luck.
Wallace takes a glance up into the sky, then leads the rest into the building.
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INT. ALAN'S APARTMENT - CLOUDY AFTERNOON
Wallace opens the door. A police officer waiting right outside, hands clasped together.
The four walk in and observe; several police officers standing around. One doing something with the blood on the wall and couch. Collecting it.
A police officer turns to them.
OFFICER
The man's in the back, go talk to him.
(Wallace nods and the four follow. They enter the bedroom.)
Alan sits on the bed, staring blankly, eyes sunken from his sadness and his cheeks red from his anger. Another officer leans up against the wall in front of Alan.
She turns.
OFFICER
Okay, now these men will carry on, Alan?
ALAN
Okay...
She walks out.
Wallace takes her place while the other three stay by the door.
WALLACE
There's been a kidnapping?
ALAN
Yeah, uh, my wife and, uh-
(Sniffles)
-my son.
WALLACE
How old is your son?
ALAN
Eleven months old.
WALLACE
Do you know when this took place?
ALAN
I don't know, when I was at work. They left a note.
WALLACE
(As if talking to a little kid)
Oh really, well let me see it.
Alan reaches behind him and grabs the note, gives it to Wallace.
Wallace skims it over.
WALLACE
Now this isn't good.
ALAN
(Quickly, annoyed)
Of coarse it's not, it's my fucking wife and child!
WALLACE
Okay, just calm down, we'll have this underway shortly. Now, what is this note about though?
ALAN
I don't know.
WALLACE
About owing any people money? any enemies you might have. Any corporation, or mob, this might be from? Anything?
ALAN
I don't owe anyone any money.
WALLACE
So this isn't connected to you whatsoever?
ALAN
Well, it does; they took my wife...
WALLACE
I know, and we'll have that taken care of. What is your occupation? Alan?
ALAN
I'm a construction worker.
WALLACE
For what company?
ALAN
Barren construction. Two years. I don't know what this is about.
WALLACE
I know that. What was your wife?
ALAN
An orthodontist. This doesn't make sense.
WALLACE
I know.
A brief pause. Wallace returns to the window to see it's raining hard. He smiles, and turns back.
WALLACE (CONT.)
What's her name?
ALAN
Loren.
WALLACE
Well I'm going to assume that Loren was the main source of income for the family- no- disrespect to you or anything.
ALAN
I know. She was.
WALLACE
Are you going to be able to afford the apartment?
ALAN
Well, you're going to get her back, right?
WALLACE
We'll try. That's all I can say.
ALAN
What are you going to do, then?
WALLACE
We'll scan the place for finger prints, test the blood, you know, pick out little hairs... all that jazz.
ALAN
Don't talk like that.
WALLACE
Sorry.
Wallace looks over to the three by the door. Just standing.
Turns back to Alan.
WALLACE
So I think we'll have to get you out of the house for know while we search the place.
ALAN
(Sighs, slaps his legs, gets up)
Okay.
Alan leaves the room and almost bumps into an entering PHOTOGRAPHER. He takes a picture. The photo slides out the front, and he catches it while it falls.
He turns. Takes another elsewhere. Then again.
Wallace joins the other three.
WALLACE
Maybe we should ask the neighbors?
An OFFICER hears this, and chips in.
OFFICER
He's the only one in this building.
TOADVINE
No neighbors?
OFFICER
Yeah.
JACKY
(Wallace)
Then what do we do?
Wallace looks around. Sees everyone at work.
WALLACE
Then I think we're done here.
JACKY
Then what would we do?
WALLACE
Then we take a little Sunday drive. Out for justice and all that.
OSWALD
(Smirks)
You kidding me?
WALLACE
(Also smirks)
Well, we have to at least SEEM like we're productive.
They exit the apartment.
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EXT. ALAN'S APARTMENT BUILDING - CLOUDY AFTERNOON
Heavy rain.
A propelled drone slowly spies down on the streets. One eye, white, moving back and forth, up and down. It disappears behind a building.
Wallace brings out both of his palms and lets them both get soaked. He turns, cocks his head, and smiles.
WALLACE
I'm feelin' pretty good about our little bet.
OSWALD
We'll see.
They all get in their squad car. Wallace driving, Oswald in the passenger seat, and the other two in the back.
From inside the car.
JACKY
But what ARE we going to do? Just drive around?
OSWALD
Yep.
JACKY
Shouldn't we do something about the kidnapping.
WALLACE
Looked to me like it was under control.
JACKY
But shouldn't we do something ANYWAY?
WALLACE
(Turns back, holds the head rest)
Jacky, you got to understand. If you don't need to do something you don't want to do, don't do it. In this job. School, extra credit, yeah, of coarse. But not as a cop. Don't waste your time, don't take unnecessary risks.
JACKY
(Confused)
And this is coming from you?
WALLACE
I said it...
OSWALD
He's right, Jacky.
Jacky turns to Toadvine, and Toadvine shrugs.
JACKY
So we aren't going to do anything about what happened?
WALLACE
No.- Look, I just want to get paid. To get paid, I need to be productive. We'll drive around, stop some petty theft or something. THEN, we get paid. Being a police officer isn't taking up a role, it's just taking up a job. A job at a company called the police department. And the sooner you get that through that puny skull of yours, the easier this job will be.
JACKY
Are you for real?
WALLACE
Whole-heartily.
OSWALD
Jacky, don't say anything else. Just accept it. You'll thank yourself later.
JACKY
This is ridiculous!
WALLACE
What you need to know is that police work, ISN'T like it is on TV! It's boring, tedious, and a hell of a lot of paper work. Stay clear, you get less paper work, and you still get paid. You should know this by now.
JACKY
Are you corrupt?
WALLACE
(Smirks)
Don't ask me that up front...
Without looking at the stick-shift, he shifts into drive, and turns around.
Cut out to down the street a little ways, leveled with the car, as Wallace goes forward and does a U-turn, then drives off towards the mega-complexes.
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