Author: pupgirl123 PM
I was writing a different poem, but then this came out. I'm not sure about it, so please tell me what you think. Please no flames.Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Words: 181 - Published: 03-07-13 - Status: Complete - id: 3106898
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This is my first rhymin poem, so be nice, okay? I'm was doing a freeverse, but then this came out, so i decided to let you decide how good it is. Please Review.
Jericho once stood tall,
A blessed city, that would never fall.
It's walls stood high, strong and tough
Nothing in the world would be strong enough
To do the unthinkable, impossible feat,
And take down the walls could never be beat.
Yes no one thought they would see the day
That the great Jericho walls gave way.
But then on the horizon arose a threat
An enemy they had never before met.
And they stormed the walls marching around
Praying that a weakness could be found.
For days nothing happened
All they did was march, with no more actions.
And just as the people started to relax,
The walls of their great city collapsed.
And when the soldiers stormed from the outside in,
The people of Jericho just couldn't win.
And the city fell that fateful day
Whe Jericho's great walls gave way.