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Author: Lamie
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Horror - Reviews: 6 - Published: 06-19-01 - Updated: 06-19-01 - id:323261
I can for once say that I own this, well, part of this story the other half goes to Stephie-chan. Nu-huh! I had fun writing this story! I did. Stephanie started this story and than I took it cause she wasn't writing anymore and I said "Hey, I bet I can write something good with this!" and so she said, "Shoot." and so I did and I came up with this, nu-huh nu-huh! Please review, I want to know your opinions! Stephanie's notes: Ashley is part three of my stoopid vampire stories, Tera is part one, Mona is part two, and this is part three, though you can still read this without reading the others. Though I would like you to read them! On with the story:

"Ashley"
By Sailor MJBR, and Serenity6453

The children climbed over the rocks stumbaling and such. A girl with red shorts and a blue shirt lead the others across the large almost flat boulders. The second one in line stumbled and a boy behind her grabed her by the elbow to steady her. The littlest one, at the end of the parade, yelled to the others, "Wait! Wait for me!"
The girl at the front stops and turns around waiting for the little girl. The girl in front gave an impatient sigh."Alisa! Your so slow, why don't you turn back, I don't want you coming along. The rocks get more jagged as we go along and I don't want you getting hurt!"
"Ashley, you know dad'll kill you if you leave me behind!" the little girl named Alisa whined. She climbed forward some more attempting to keep up with the others.
"Dad won't kill me he isn't even here!" Ashley yelled.
"But I'll tell him!"
"Fine you come, but if you get hurt, it's not my fault." Alisa 'humphed' her response and started to hop across a large gap.
"No Alisa! You'll fall, go around!" Lis warned.
"I can make it." Alisa's little hands reached to grab a steady hold on the other rock, her foot started to move to the other, but it was clear to the others that she would fall if she continued, Ashley seeing this hurried around the others to help her sister. Just than the waves picked up making the rock Alisa was stepping on slippery, and causing her to fall, Ashley wrapped her arms around Alisa's elbows to keep her from falling into the lake. Alisa screamed, and everyone else watched with thier eyes buldged and and thier mouths hung open.
"Are you alright?" Devin asked as he stood by Lis and Ben.
"We're fine," Ashley mumbled taking the lead again. "You, Ashley started pointing to Alisa, "go exactly where we go, Devin, Lis will you please stand behind her and catch her if she falls? Ben and I if he well, will stand in front of her and we'll catch her if she falls foward, got it?" Everyone nodded thier heads.
In less than five minutes, they reached the end of the rocks. Then the four of them climbed up the dirt path, with white stones scattered around here and there. Alisa had trouble climbing over the wooden fence. As soon as they had climbed up the monstrousitious hill which was as steep as the hill on a roller coaster, yet not as high, they heaved thier tired bodies onto the adult swings, which was like a red seat with white specks all over it, that swings. As soon as Ashley was rested and had caught her breath she climbed on top Lis's swing, put her barefeet on the steel armrest, which had pebbles stuck to them because this is what filled the playground of the park. Grasping her hands on the yellow bar, which held up the swinging chairs, she pushed off with her feet and got the swing moving.
"Stop! My stomech is getting queasy, I haven't been on a swing since I was twelve!" Lis's hands clenched the bars tighter making sure she wouldn't slip from the higher rising, still, swinging.
"Your going to have to jump off soon, I can't take this much longer." Ashley's hands were starting to sweat as she held onto the bar, fear in her chest praying Lis would jump off soon.
"You want me to jump?! That's ridiculous!" Lis's hands held tight.
"Either that or I fall and my skull cracks." Ashley answerd non-chalant.
"Fine," Lis grumbled as she slowly scooted to the edge of the seat, the chair swinging higher and higher in her eyes. She inhaled slowly than jumped crashing into the pebbles beneath her and landing on her butt.
"Your a regular cat." Devin sarcastically said while patting her on the back.

A man around the age of 28 came from the shadows, the others didn't pay much attention, but Ashley felt the hairs on her neck raise, she had an uneasy feeling as if her stomech was turning, and a sudden headache came. This only happened when something bad was going to happen. Twice before she had felt like this, once right before she had learned her mother had breast cancer, and again when her cousin was in a fatal car accident. Her mother had died three years ago of the breast cancer. She wasn't going to think of this now, the preasent was what she had to concentrate on and what this man wanted. He walked up, seeming domineering somehow, his blonde hair blew in an unnatural wind, his mysterious grey eyes glanced to and fro on each of the teenagers. He worea black shirt and black jeans, which had to be killing him in the tremendous heat of summer.
"What do you want?" Ashley's voice quivered slightly but definatly held a fierce ((I before E except after C, not F, lauren.)) demanding voice that wasn't with her physically.
"I want the one called 'Ashley'." he answered, his eyes staring into her blue ones.

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