So I started this story when I was 15. I’m now 21 and in spite everything the world has thrown at me and my overwhelming laziness, I have finished this story. Still, I know it could be better and I hope to improve it and re-work it to make it… not really publishable, but if I were to put it on self-publish place for people to buy, I would want it to be something worth buying. That is was I eventually plan on doing with this and as much as I love this story, I know I wouldn’t pay money to read it.

That being said, please leave criticism here. What do you feel the story is lacking? What else would you have liked to have seen? What do you think were weaknesses? Anything you can tell me would be greatly helpful. Say anything that has ever come to mind regarding this story. I look forward to hearing what you have to say and a big thank you to those of you that have stuck it out through all of this, even when I would go a year without updating. It’s super appreciated.