This is a 73 page story I wrote out for Creative Writing as well as my own pleasure. I'm in the process of typing it up (I've gotten to page 15) But it's taking longer because the original story needed some tweeking (I love Tweek from South Park!! Ne way...) because I was in a hurry and it was like a rough draft. I'm adding more details, as well as making some things in the plot make more sense. IF anyone is reading this, be patient I'm typing it up as fast as I can!
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Okay this is basically so you can understand the story as well as just see where I'm coming from here...
Nick Vannatta, the goalie on my hockey team, his brother Joey, who's 11, his mom Karen and his dad and my coach Bruce suddenly disappeared to England this summer without telling anyone. Me and my friend were riding our bikes past their old house one day and the garage was open and there was boxes inside and their car was outside. This was about one month after they had moved. My friend decided that the boxed were full of drugs and they were secretly hiding in their house. So yes the first part of this story is true, then as soon as you discover the Vannattas are in their house (and Emma find a knife in her drawer) I've started using my "creative" abilities.
Also, Emma Barker (my best friend)'s mom, Cheryl, worked at the same company as Bruce did until he moved. Their boss is really Ron Davis, my friend Bryce's dad. So that parts true too. Actually TRW is a military computer thing, but for the sake of this story it's like the mob.
Hmm... what else can I explain??? Nothing, except Staci does live in Nick's old neighbourhood and I was friends with her before she moved there. Also Ryan Shull and Chris Schulte are Nick's old neighbours and they also did play on my hockey team.
That's all! Let the insanity begin (and actually it's not too bad...)
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