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Author: Radical Chic
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Reviews: 8 - Published: 03-09-02 - Updated: 03-09-02 - id:648573
Please review. I wrote this for a creative writing class and I would really like some feedback. Thanks.

It was so cold

The day the world stood still

Time stopped for a moment

And minds tried to kill

Reality ceased

The day the turning stopped

I watched in horror

As the illusion popped

The vision dissappeared

The day hope layed down and died

Along with the world

And I know no one tried

My mind stopped thinking

The day we ceased to exist

I looked on in awe

As no one tried to resist

--Radical Chic



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