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Strings
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Mistress Jakira PM
Guitar thoughts, in an brief but original style if I do say so myself...self-explanatory (make sure you read the A/N, however), four lines, free verse.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Words: 148 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 08-01-02 - Published: 03-10-02 - id: 650270
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Strings

Strings of the guitar
pluck The strings of my heart
play The song of my soul
pulls my lips apart
and my mind to a faraway star.

Author's Notes: You know how when you're daydreaming and you forget about reality...when you wake up, your mouth is always open. That explains the fourth line. That seemed unclear, so I thought I needed to clarify.
Each time a letter is capitalized, it starts a new sentence within the previous one, in case you didn't notice that. When I wrote it, I was listening to Time by Opus-4 ( I think) off the second OST of Bubblegum Crisis Tokyo 2040. So it was written in about 6.5 minutes. And uploaded in the same day! That's a world record, don't ya know. ^_^ Hope you like it. ~Jakira

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