
| Fun with Prophecy!
Author: Mistress Jakira *UPDATED MAY 13, 2002* Woohoo! ^_^ PG cause one of em involves murder. Sometimes instead of regular poetry I write fictional prophetic pieces; I've collected all of them here.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 3 - Words: 897 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 05-13-02 - Published: 03-11-02 - id: 652386
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The first of five touches the
force
Of the fire from which it came.
Those who are trapped, compelled
by this power
Play a deadly game.
The second force is the symbol
of life
And one that causes death;
Water's claustrophobic fate
Arising from the depths.
The third bar has the color
of topaz,
Element of rock:
A sign of true and solid strength
Unchanged by the ticks of the
clock.
The center of air, though passive,
is true
To the whirl of the whipping
wind,
Though its careless but deadly
hurricane breeze
Of course can, in turn, do
you in.
Like thunder rumbling down from
the sky
The fifth power comes from
within;
The amulet simply magnifies
The strength which you had
to begin.
'Tis not worldly power this
jewel doth hold
In its bars so be you warned:
Evil seeping inside of your
heart
The gem shall surely scorn.
So guard against it carefully,
Lest such injustice be borne,
And the wrath of the Lord be
unleashed upon
The Earth just to even the
score.
Author's Notes: Actually
this was for math extra credit in 8th grade. *laughs* I never
turned it in because I also had to make a poster (which I didn't like and
couldn't do in the allotted time due to my inherent laziness), but I had
to write a story about this weird shape--I forget what she called it--but
it's impossible in real life. You can only draw it on paper in 2-D,
there is no possible way to make it into a three-dimensional figure.
I thought that was pretty cool anyway. So I started thinking about
the story and I thought "why not a poem?" I guess I was on a poetry kick,
but I always ask myself that question, because poetry takes up less
time than stories do, and they're much easier for me to keep continuing
with. They're so much shorter.
So I looked
at the shape and thought about it a while, and my little anime-corrupted
brain always thinks of things in the five elements, and when I sat down
at lunch to write it, this is what came out. Not bad, if I do say
so myself. ^_^ It was fun.
The last
rhyming thing (borne/score) doesn't really rhyme, but don't tell me because
I already know. ^_^; I couldn't just toss what I was trying to say.
The rhyme scheme is fairly obvious, so I won't bother pointing it out.
Yes, slight religious reference at the end, but look, I'm a Christian and
I'm proud of it. So...there. And prophecies are much easier
when you mix in a religious element. Makes them more believable;
aren't prophecies usually having something to do with God or the
gods? (Maybe it's just too much David Eddings reading for me.)
Anywho,
I hope you liked it. ^_^ I thought it was pretty neat myself.
Thanks for reading!! ~MJ
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