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Author: Damien Buck
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Reviews: 6 - Published: 05-05-02 - Updated: 05-05-02 - id:761229
Yeah... I just realized that I've never really been hugged before so I decided to write a poem about it. I might've been hugged when I was little but I can't remember... Oh well... And I'm gonna try not to rhyme this time.

Missing Embrace

Arms holding you close,

Keeping you warm and safe,

Is that how it feels,

To be in a loving embrace?

To forget to worlds troubles,

Or just your own pities,

To just be caught in a moment,

Of security and warmth.

To be able to let it all out,

To cry all your pain,

To relinquish all your fear,

And be able face a new day.

Is that how it feels,

To be in someone’s arms,

To get away from the dark,

And be able to see the light?

Will I find that light,

And those loving arms,

Or keep to the dark,

And never show my heart.

Yup that's me... The closest I came to a hug as one of those half hugs. It's pretty sad, but I live on. Did I get the hug part right? Or is it completely wrong? Please review and tell me!



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