|Three Harsh Words
Author: Mistress Jakira PM
(From Me To You) Both sides of a story, you could say; formatted strangely. I guess I'm going through an experimental time. It's only half what you think it is!! Oh just look. lol ^_^Rated: Fiction K - English - Drama/Romance - Words: 1,973 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 06-03-02 - id: 814790
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If I could go back in time
Author's Notes: Nice
formatting, eh? ^_~ lol...I did it because you can read it any way you
want to and it still gives the same message, just with a different effect,
y'know? If you read it regularly from right to left, it's like there's
two voices of the same person giving a separate story on the same subject,
and one voice kinda hovers over the other, and they get closer together
when the two sides of the poem get closer...that's how I imagined it, anyway.
You could also read just the left column with the middle parts, then the
right column with the middle parts. Or, you could just read it down
the middle and it makes choppy sense. =) It's pretty neat, I guess.
If you were wondering, the whole "apologizing" thing was what started my little crush--he did something very rude and then, much to my surprise, he apologized. I never saw anyone do such a thing before; I was amazed. That's why that's in there.
If you have any further questions, don't hesitate to email me! (firstname.lastname@example.org) But don't expect a short explanation! You have been warned. ^_~ Thanks for reading! ~MJ
Date of Composition: 5/31-6/3/02