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Author: Molly-chan the Anime/Game fan
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Mystery - Reviews: 92 - Published: 07-27-02 - Updated: 12-21-04 - id:878056

Author's Note 2004
Alright, before ANYONE decides to just give up on this because it was written very badly, I will point out one thing right now, I wrote this in the year 2000, when I was just beginning my writing technique, when I had just browsed unto the internet and found out my abilities for the HTML stunts, so everything you will read between Episodes 1-12 are just like this, after that it started to get a little better and it continues to get better, it's a full emotional outscale at the episode called "Found Out," So please, before you just give up, or review me to this, I say now, I WROTE this in 2000, I have been far too lazy/busy to update it into a format that will follow how well I write now, so please, just continue on reading before you decide to just give up, well that's my note and good-bye. And yes, I know I did a LOT of typos, but my spelling ability...well suck. So please skip past those if at all possible and please enjoy my attempt at an anime, which I will later give this idea to make a full-scale idea, now that this is the last note, thank you and this time truly good-bye until then.

Authors Note

If anybody like this idea..tell me! - Anyway our main girl is Mo-ess(Mow ess)she has short blond hair, green eyes, and was a simple American girl that could speak Chinese and Japanese. (No this will be in English)then..well you'll find out.

Spirit Girls

Hi! or Konichaa! ((I love that word!)) I'm Mo-ess! And I have to, to Japan and live there now.

It was a great disaster when I found out.

I was chatting with my friends when my mom came on the Internet and announced it in front of Everyone!

I was embarrassed!

But later..I was sad.

As we packed I yelled at my father loudly.

He sweatdropped trying to get me calmed down. ((Do I have to say this? Anime people!))

No one would want a blonde to be yelling at them in a car...and this on had a frying pan.

((Must use...frying pan))

It didn't take long to reach Japan cause we lived in .

Sure it took a couple days.

But what's that to a grangy girl that needs to CHAT!

Of course I was mad!

But I waited patiently.

The next day.....

We were in a house that seemed comfortable.

"Time to wake up." Mom said happily.

That..scared me a bit.

Mom never liked getting me out of bed.

As I got dressed I could see Mom and Dad...Dancing?

Weird...

As I got dressed in the uniform. ((You know the one SM has..well I found out that it's true! They use those kinds of uniforms))I got more nervous about my parents then the school.

"Better start walking!" Dad said in unusually cherry voice.

I didn't walk....I ran.

They scared me

As I ran I saw a small school that said, "Richew's School of..." It was fazed off at the last words...And that was the school!

YIPE! I screeched and ran into the door.

But it lifted before I could run it over.

0.o I looked as I walked in then it suddenly slammed down.

"AAYYYE!" I said walking nervously.

And I bonked into someone.

"Hello." Said a solemn voice.

As I looked up I saw a man with shining crow black hair, green petrified eyes, he was wearing a black suit, and he didn't seem to like me.

"Uhhh hehehe ; Ummm..Do you know where room.." I brought out a white little piece of paper that said the room I was to report too.

"Room...248?"

The man smiled down on me, but it wasn't a happy smile. More like a grim smile.

"Yeah. It's over there." He said pointing at a wall.

I blinked uneasy.

He scoffed.

"You must be the new girl they warned us about."

"Eh?"

"Come on." He said as he started walking.

I followed him uneasy and caring my books was hard.

"Humph" He said as I saw his eyes turn blue and make a door appear out of nowhere

00!

"What the?" I yelled when he pushed me in.

"HEY!" and I could tell that everyone in the room..was looking at me. I had a face that was: ''.

I turned around now red faced .

"Ah! You must be our new student. Everybody say hello to Mo-ess Sogi. ((I love that last name.))

"Hi." Everyone said.

"Now Miss. Sogi why don't you sit by ((An-e-Ka))

I saw a girl with bright red hair, blue eyes, waving her hand out to me.

I went to sit next to her.

"Hi I'm Rinn Anika. You must be new to the school to look like that?" (Ren)

"Eh?"

"Don't you know? This school you have to stay forever and exhale your."

"Now stop talking and lets practice lifting items."

Now I was confused!

Rinn looked in front to where the teacher was and I: 00!

The Teacher was making something flout! And her eyes were glowing blue.

"GYAH!" I yelled which made everyone surprised and the teacher drops the item.

"What the-what the?"

"Oh yes...I forgot...your parents didn't tell you." The Teacher said putting her hand on her mouth.

"WHAT!?" I yelled.

Everyone looked at me and I had my hair messed up.

"You're parents said you had E.S.P. and they said it was okay to have you at this school."

"WHAT!? I DON'T HAVE E.S.P!" I was really angry and was red.

Things started to fly around in the room and I ducked all of them.

Everyone screamed.

"Not again...256! Stop that!" Teacher yelled.

I heard lots of Boy laughter.

"Why should we when your beginners can't match up to us!" Said a familiar voice.

I saw the guy I bumped into Earlier come out with loads of boys all of them laughing.

I grew red faced..I didn’t like to be laughed at.

"NOW LISTEN HERE YOU!" I grabbed him by the collar; "I WILL NOT TOLERATE THIS! I AM MAD!" I yelled in his face and more things flew around but I didn't care. I threw a punch at him and it knocked him into the wall making a big hole.

Everyone looked at me.

I looked mad, red, and my hair was messed up.

"That's what you get!" I yelled.

A blank figure came in and charged into me to the wall.

"AH!" I yelled cause it did hurt.

I looked up at a figure that was furry brown, black evil eyes, and was bleeding at the mouth.

Everyone gasped as the figure stepped back and I landed on the ground with my legs crossed.

The monster opened its mouth and a blue orb started gathering there.

I heard thumps and saw people faint on the ground and the orb was growing.

I had a look of pure terror.

"What..the..." The monster ate the orb and looked at me surprised.

"Why aren't you down? I've sucked everyone's E.S.P. Here!"

Now I was mad.

"I DON'T HAVE E.S.P! YOU" I started to glow a white color.

"EVIL SPIRIT!" The aura flew off and hurt the creature off into the room and I fell down a bit.

"What the? How did I?"

But then I fainted.

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