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Most good poems have something that click to the writer as they construct them, and resonate through the piece. I got an echo from this one, and as I go back over and read it a few more times, more echoes ring out to me. Please read carefully if you'd like to hear something from this poem, as I sincerely hope you will. Thanks.
**IMPORTANT** Poet's note: This is an exchange between two minds; it is written out, but was never spoken aloud. The first speaker (not indented) can be considered as some inquisitive exterior spirit force that has an inkling of a human conscious, but with a more independent nature, that regards this representative of mankind (indented). Anything in parentheses is a human reaction, like a stage direction. The speakers alternate each line, starting with the spirit-voice.
##Human Being##
What do you want?
I want love
What do you need?
I need nothing
Why do you want what you do not need?
I am selfish
You are not
I am
You are not because others believe in you
I do not believe in myself
You are successful
Yes
You know this
Yes
Then you chose not to believe
We all chose not to believe
Why?
We are afraid
You are alone
Yes
Then why do you say 'we'?
(pause) I wish it were so
Do you believe wishes come true?
No
Why?
Things happen or they don't. That's just the way it is.
Do things happen to you?
Yes
Do you like them?
Sometimes
When things happen, do you wish to reverse them?
No
You accept change then
Yes
What is God?
God is change
Do you mean that?
No
What do you mean?
Life is change
Is God life?
No
What is God?
People's wishes
You don't believe in wishes
No
You don't believe in God
No
Are you afraid?
Yes
Why?
I am human
Humans are afraid?
I am
Why?
I put myself in action, which puts me in danger, which gives me fear
You do nothing now
I speak
You do not
I learn
Yes
I put something in nothing to lessen my fear
What do you fear?
What I do not know
Why?
I do not know
You are a paradox
Yes. As are you
No, I am nothing.
You are something
I am you
No
Yes
How?
What you do not know frightens you
It gives me fear
Is that not the same?
No
Why?
I choose not to accept the fear or make it part of me
Why?
So I may live
So you may change
Yes
This is your religion?
I have no religion
You have no God
Yes
Yes you have no God or yes you do have a God?
Yes
You give two answers for every question
Yes
Why?
You ask them twice
You change
Yes
Will you change your answer again?
Possibly
Do you wish for love?
(pause) Yes.