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Heartache's never looked so good
So close I can feel it
But no one's ever understood
Cut me open, watch me bleed
I feel nothing now
And nothing can stop me
Sorrow's ripe in my fields
Ready for a numbing
A wound that heals
No one else can hurt me
And I hurt no one
I've run into this
And now I'm alone
Keeping my eyes open
And watching like a hawk
Continually piercing pain
Can't bring myself to stop
I don't remember when
Hurting so bad ever felt so good
No, hurting so bad
Never felt so good
Authors Note- One Of these days I'm going to write a poem on other stuff besides suicide...even if I'm good at that..well yeh. I hope you liked it. I didn't like the last three stanzas….they just don't work.. but that's ok.. Review if you feel up to it..