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Author: Mistress Jakira (Weather or Not) Not exactly about school, but deals with it. Originally written for now-obsolete Gods and Goddesses contest. Graduation theme; I've got a double-meaning pun too. ^^ Free verse.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Drama/Romance - Words: 382 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 09-01-02 - id: 944615
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'Twas not so long
ago
that day of thunderous
fate
that loomed upon
us like a dark cloud
ready to burst with
the rains of our futures
whether we were ready
for the
weather or not.
We left behind the
days
of our adolescent
woes--
like "what music
should I listen to?",
"how stylish are
my clothes?"
It was the day of
graduation
for each a brief
moment in the public eye
as we walked across
the stage
then had to get on
with our lives
Everyone was glad
to give up
the standardized
tests and Shakespeare plays
but it wasn't quite
as easy
when our friends
all went away...
And most of the sweethearts
parted ways,
no exception were
you and I--
the risks of life
and love were great;
it didn't matter
how hard I tried (or cried).
I called you many
times, but oh
somehow we drifted
apart;
but I've still got
that jacket you gave me
and you've still
got my heart.
'Twas not so long
ago
those days full of
thunderous fate
and while they're
nothing but mummified memories now
brought alive only
by scanner and pictures,
if you were to ask
me, I'd still stay with you
forever,
weather or not.
Author's Notes:
This
was originally written for the now seemingly obsolete Gods and Goddesses
contest. I was supposed to use these ten words in a poem: jacket,
mummified, public, scanner, graduation, called, days, plays, woes, and
risks. I'd say I did an okay job. ^_^
About the dual meaning--I just somehow stumbled upon the whole "weather
or not" pun, but I thought it was pretty clever of me, actually. ^_^ I
hope you thought so, too.
A note about
the rhyming--in the middle verses it's obvious, but if you match up the
first and last verse, the third line of the first verse rhymes with the
third line of the last verse, the fourth line rhymes with fourth line,
etc. Just to clear that up. ^^ That's all I'll say--questions go to my
listed e-mail address, you know it. ^_^ Ja! ~MJ
Date of Composition:
Sunday, August 11, 2002, approx. 10:30 p.m.
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