Author: Nireths PM
ok, it's about the life of two teens and a killer is after them for an unknown reason...R & R plz, it containes a bit of violence and bad words..Rated: Fiction T - English - Horror/Mystery - Words: 1,378 - Published: 09-19-02 - Status: Complete - id: 975552
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Ok, this is what I did in my spare time, this is a romantic/horror story, I like horror stories don't ask why. Anyways I'm a horroble speller, I'm sorry for that. I'm dedicating to writting at this time because I can't draw any good lately. I've never done a romantic story before so it might sound weird but I tried.
A girls walks in the street, all alone. The wind whispers in her ears, she shivers from the whispy cold air. Soon she gets to her home street, and tunrs right to her house. She stops in front of the door. She turns around her back facing the door, she looks around in the snow covered floor. Everything white and no one around, she felt strange maybe even alone and decided to get in the house. She takes out her key that falls to the floor, she kneels down to take them again, "Hi" she hears and turns around slowly. "Hi" she says in her sweet shy voice. She looks at the stranger, it's a guy, wearing a dark blue thin jacket and jeans she tought that someone might be cold in that but he didn't seem to mind. His face was stern looking, his smile was nice and comforting, his eyes the blue color of his jacket. His eyes so sad and sincere looking she couldn't stop looking at his eyes.
"My name is Luis, I live next door, but they left me out, could I use your phone" he tells her and keeps smiling. "Of course" she tells him then smiles and closes her eyes, she stands up fast and opens her eyes to open the door. Luis walkt to her slowly, the snow didn't seem to bother him at all. She opens the door and points him in "Come in", he walks to the door lets her in and he closes the door slowly not making a sound. "The phone is in the living room" she tells him while she takes her baby blue jacket and hangs it in the closet next to the door. "Thanks" he says before even using the phone, he takes the phone and dials the girl goes to the kitchen to get a cup of chocolate. She hears when he hangs up the phone maybe a little mad and frustrated. No one was at the girls house, eveything silent, she walks to the living room and sees him looking out on the window.
"Thank you" he tells her again without even looking at her not smiling anymore. "You can sit down if you want, take of you jacket if your warm" she tells him sitting down on the couch. He looks around the room, everything so exquisite, then he looks at her and kind of studies her. She was well fit, long brown hair, fair color skin, and grey color eyes, actually they looked honey color because of the sweater she was wearing. Than he stared at her, she started to feel uncomfortable after all she had a stranger in her house and he seemed to be very strong. "Don't move" he tells her and walks to her slowly, she gets a chill down her spine. He comes to her, she was frozen in place, he puts his right hand in the side of the couch, she watches his carefully to see what he was doing. Then in a flash he moves his left hand to the side of he face. Their faces come close to each other he wasn't actually concentrating on her for a while but when he looked at her he pulled back.
When he was about half a foot away she saw in his left hand a rattle snake. "A rattle snake here???" he asks, "Ohh how did he get out, it's my brother's pet" she explains. She gently takes the snake of his hand and walks to the stairs, "you wanna come and see??" she asks him. "Why am I like this??" she thinks to herself, "Umm sure" he says and walks behind her. They got upstairs and turned left, on the first door was the bathroom, more at front on the next door was her brother's room. She opened the door and saw how the snake escaped, the top wasn't properly shut. She carefully put the snake in and closed the lid properly. Luis looked around the room, most of it was a dark green and it was dark. They got out of the room and se shut the door. She pointed to the door at the end of the halway from the left and told him that it was her father's room. Then they both walked to the other side on the right side of the stairs were two doors, the one next to the stairs for the attic. And the one at the end of the hall was her room.
She opened the door to let both inside, the room was quite pretty, everything was white and baby blue. Her bed was twin size, she had a closed laptop baby blue color, she had several family pictures around and a painting at the left of the entrance. He didn't go in until she told him that it was fine, "why are you so nice??" he asked her finally. "I don't know, I guess I had a good feeling about you" she told him and gave him a bright smile and he smiled back softly. A tear might have come out of his eyes but he wiped them fast, "Why are you crying??" she asked him, "no reason, are we friends then??" he asked her softly. "Of course we are" she told him and hugged him, she felt like she had known him for years, when only it had been a few minutes. He was shocked at her hugging him, he acted as if he hadn't been hugged in years or even had a friend before.
"What's going on here??" a man asked, opening the door a little, he noticed a guy in his daughters room that he hadn't see before. "Hi dad, your home early" she said happily, "Hi" Luis tells him, "Who's this??" he asks and walks to the young man. "Dad this is Luis, Luis this is my father" she introduces each other. "It's nice to meet you Luis are you new around here??" he tells Luis, "Yes, I live next door" Luis tells him. "Well, both of you don't be doing anything your not supposed to, I'll downstairs" he tells them walking to the door, "Dad" she complains smiling. He just smiles and closes the door, leaving them alone once more.
"What school are you going to??" she asks him, "G.I.U." he tells her, "Really, me too" she tells him and that conforts him. "Tell me about your family" she tells him, "my real family or the family I live wiht??" he asks, "What do you mean??" she questions him. "Well you see I'm adopted, my family died in an airplane accident when I was 4 years old, I've been to 3 orphanages and been in about a dozen families" he tells her. It seems like he trusted her, his one true friend. "Ohh how awful, I lost my mom When I was 2 years old" she told me, she felt like telling him something to make him feel the same not different. He told her about all the families he's been with, about his two real older brothers, and many more things. They became the best of friends they could always talk to each other about everything and go to anywhere together. He was 2 years older than him she awas 17 years old she went to University that young.
First chapter is boring but I'm planning to make a good ending or that's what I think. Hehe I'm so bad at writting love scenes which is next I think I'll make this several chapters long maybe, the plot is weird, hehe, I'm still trying to fiz it.