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The Six of Hearts
Topic: Fafviner and Guilty Heaven
Is it okay for me to post? I guess....? (is a little bit timid about this. please don't kill me!!)

So I have two different worlds I've created, each from two different stories I'm working on (only one is posted.)

The first one is the kingdom of Fafviner from my story The Red Witch Testament. Pretty much your average fantasy kingdom thing-it's got your standard capital city (Harmony Ltchet), your principal bodies of water (Great Ferry Lake and Lapis Bay) and is divided into a bunch of prvinces overseen by your assorted noblemen (dukes, barons, and the like), some of which include Malgrovo, Lovengrot, Bridgenmaltry, and Elsglaive. To make things interesting, there are also some bodering countries and such.

There are three different races in Fafviner. The majority is the Arkans, who are pretty much your normal humans. Then there are witches, who are currently being persecuted by the Arkans and have powers in tune with nature. The third group of people are the gypsies, who travel throughout the continent and the kingdom. They mostly originate from the southern desert countries, but most of them are on a journey to find the missing country of Swalissi (the "promised land") And that's all you need to know about that world.

The second world doesn't really have a name, but is only described as being a storybook world. The little town in this world that the story focuses on is called Guilty Heaven (same name as the story, coming soon!) Everyone in the town of Guilty Heaven is born with a "costume," which gives them a certain power/weapon/etc. Some residents have decided the enter the knight acadamey to become one of Heaven's Knights and fight against Lord Winter, the resident bad guy. Some residents of Guilty Heaven include a dog boy, a cabaret girl, an angel, the Frost Witch, a wolf-headed man, several bat boys/girls, a vampire, and the resident outcast Noir, the only child born without a costume.

Okay, I'm done now....feel free to critque.

#1 Apr 12th 2007, 6:48pm
DudeInHyrule
Sounds cool! But since you have two worlds, you could have started two different topics. ^_^ One for each world. I might start one for Ositea once I start the book that takes place in it.
#2 Apr 16th 2007, 12:39pm
Tup Bup
The idea of gypsies sounds really interesting. Will they be involved with the main plot of the story or do they flit in and out of history. Gypsies are generally feared by civilised people as they steal from them and generally live outside of law. This gives them more scope and variety in the kinds of people that travel with them and what they can get up to. What are you going to do with the gypsies?
#3 Mar 10th, 4:39pm

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