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Verusan
Topic: Multi-planetary world.
I'm new to this here, but I supose I could tell a bit about the world I've started to create a while ago. It's not complete yet, but I've got a few ideas of what it should be like. Anyway...

So far I have three planets, but will probably make more. One of them is called Notah. It's a higly advanced planet, with technology far past ours (obviously). As far as the story goes right now, I have a huge city, which over the years has become the capital of the planet. The prblem here is that it's mainly controlled by a mafia organisation. It's not that bad... they're taking good care of the city and all that, but they crush anyone that tries to take over the city, which creates quite a few fights every day. That's because there's another organisation in town that the mafia fear. More about them later.

The next planet is Atre, another advanced planet with strong technology. However as far as the story is concerned it's destroyed in the very beginning by an unknown force. One of the main characters comes from this planet. I'll introduce him soon.

The third planet has not ben givven a name as of now, but will be the main focus in the later chapters (to which I haven't gotten yet). This is (as cliches go) the undeveloped planet. In comparrison to Earth it's still in the mideval times. But as far as planets go this is probably the most advanced one when it comes to magic. Nobody actually uses magic anymore, but there are a lot of magical artefacts and sites with powerful magical energy.

Now then... for the characters... or at least the races. I can describe the charaters if anybody's interested.

One race is obviously the humans that inhabit all of these planets. There's a race of humanoid lizards mentioned once, but otherwise they're not in the story at all. The main focus is on a special race I call "Symbol Warriors". I suppose they could be called a sub-race, since origianaly they're human. But their inner body parts are formed in a slightly different way. First of all, the SW can change their chape. Each SW chooses his or her shape later on in life. They can change into one being and one being only, but their forms may change according to circumstances.

The most important part of any SW is their magic. Each SW can control two minor elements (with the total of five: fire, water, wind, earth and electricity) and one larger element (three total: Light, Darkness and Life). The SW have a special bodypart called "enns". Like veins they create a network in the bosy of an SW that allows them to trasport pure enrgy from one body part to another or to send it outside of the body to summon forth magic or fuel up their artifacts.

I am yet unsure of this, but there seems to be another race, similar to the SW. There's one character that seems to be just as powerful as any SW (if not stronger) while not being able to change his form. There are formless SW out there, but they cannot reach such power without their forms.

Anyway, that's all I've got so far.

#1 May 26th 2007, 3:47pm
Rudersovgy
EH.
#2 Jun 17th 2007, 12:31pm
Verusan
Jaha... what exactly does that mean?
#3 Jun 18th 2007, 6:52am

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