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No Trust
Topic: Murmaider
There are no fingerprints

Deep under water

Nothing to tie one to a crime

And if you seek vengeance

All you need are instruments of pain

You need your:

Knives? Check.

Rope? Check.

Dagger? Check.

Chains? Check.

Locks? Check.

Laser Beams? Check.

Acid? Check.

Body Bag? Check.

Murmaider x 16

But beware

For when you quench your blood thirst

Others will seek their vengeance on you

And they won't rest

Until you're dead

They'll have their:

Shiv? Check.

Pipe? Check.

Hammer? Check.

Axe? Check.

Subject? Check.

Location? Check.

Desire? Check.

Vengeance? Check.

Hold your breath, swim and strain

Smell the death, can't escape

Blood will cloud and drift away

I tried to murder some mermaids

It's so cold, they all know

What you've done, you can't run

Vengeance is the law for thee

A thousand leagues below the sea

You've been tracked, you've been seen

Murdering the next of kin

Ate their hearts, drank their blood

Washed your face in blackened mud

Now you swim, try to hide

Heart beats faster from inside

Thought it was a big charade

Your life was ended by Mermaids.

Murmaider x16

Swords? Check.

Saws? Check.

Clubs? Check.

Claws? Check.

Hatred? Check.

Anger? Check.

Mermaid? Check.

Murder? Check.

MURDER! MURDER! MERMAID MURDER! x4

You've been tracked, you've been seen

Murdering the next of kin

Ate their hearts, drank their blood

Washed your face in blackened mud

Now you swim, try to hide

Heart beats faster from inside

Thought it was a big charade

Your life was ended by Mermaids.

Your life was ended by Mermaids.

#1 Oct 17th 2007, 9:03pm . Edited Oct 21st 2007, 1:34pm
tofujunky
That's pretty catchy. I especially like all the "[blank]? Check." portions.
#2 Oct 19th 2007, 12:38am
No Trust
Yeah, it's good enough that I wish I wrote it.
#3 Oct 20th 2007, 9:34pm
tofujunky
I suspected you weren't the author. No mention of killing cops, beating commie ** or chronic masturbation was a dead giveaway.
#4 Oct 21st 2007, 1:09pm
No Trust
When have I ever written about chronic masturbation?

Anyway, if it was mine obviously I would've posted it in the poetry section. It's from the Dethalbum, so probably the lyrics were written by Brendon Small: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LSJXW9GW9zc

#5 Oct 21st 2007, 1:27pm . Edited Oct 21st 2007, 1:28pm
tofujunky
When have I ever written about chronic masturbation?

Oh my god, I just spent the last five minutes cleaning cranberry juice off my computer screen. And I still can't stop chuckling. I don't know if I say this enough, but you guys are great.

#6 Oct 21st 2007, 4:41pm
No Trust
Wait, I said something funny?
#7 Oct 21st 2007, 5:16pm

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