Please review these poems you know constructive critism coz i want the truth i won't get upset i just won't to know wot people think and how i can improve. I will of course review yrs if you give me some links =)

opps forgot to give u the links forgetful usual me!

Here they are:

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2508840/1/Unloved

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2511028/1/The_life_of_a_geek

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2511040/1/Weeping_Guitar

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2511527/1/Imprisoned

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