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Topic: Lasil

NAME: Lasil (True name: Trinita Zuentel, but she doesn't know that)

AGE: 26 (at the end of the story)

RACE: Walfre-Raptereon. (Read 'Vengeance' to get the meaning behind the names and well as any referrences to Veng ^_^)

LOOKS: Lizardish in appareance. Green-flecked gold eyes, bronze skin, waist-long raven hair, four-digit fingers with inch-long claws, three-toed feet. Build is on the dainty side of average, is deemed pretty but no more, child-like looks but with obvious 'womanly curves'.

I say she's 5 foot, but still not quite sure as she's supposed to be only waist-high to a 7 foot guy (if someone can tell me if it's right, it would help).

WEAPONS: Small dagger mostly, but can use claws.

ALIGMENT: Good.

LIKES: Being doted on, Shopping, Gowns, Jewellery

DISLIKES: Being treated like a child. Being called a '**'(or any hints alluding to it)

HISTORY: Made in such the same way as Vengeance is, Lasil's history is only revealed to Vengeance in the sequel and is so far never revealed to Lasil herself (it may change, but I doubt it).

Lasil's mother, Juinta, WAS a High Lady of the Zuentel family and reputedly the most beautiful woman ever. Vain as hell, Juinta decided she'd never marry but still craved a daughter. Hearing of humans that could make her a child without any father ties, Juinta agreed to mixing her blood with walfre. Bearing the child herself, she dies in the birth.

The humans send for the nursemaid Juinta hired, but her brother (having married a successful merchant and already a father) sees his oppurtunity to gain the title and riches for himself. He kills the nursemaid and her husband, but fails to kill the two children who escape into the desert (the girl dies not long after and the boy becomes a Rogue who falls in love with Lasil despite nurturing a hate for the High Lady and her unseen daughter).

Whew.

Lasil herself doesn't know what she is to begin with. She's raised by two human men until they're killed who have only been speaking to her in the human tongue. She's rescued by Veng who takes her back to his home and teaches her the native language. Living a brief with a woman that Veng trusts won't try and dispose of her, Lasil's instincts tell her to flee into the desert where she spends four years in solitude.

She's attacked by two men intent on killing and raping her (and possibly in that order), she manages to kill one before discovered by Veng (who's in the area investigating the presence of these very men). Veng kills the other man, suffering a small wound that Lasil tends to. She tries to show how 'grateful' she is, but he rejects her advances. He takes her back to their home where she then tries again by using the current initiation that's happening. Veng accepts the invitation, but tells her he won't bed her until legally considered an adult.

Not discouraged, she tries again a few more times before her tenth birthday where she's then deemed an adult (I know it sounds wacky, but if you double it to get her 'earth age' then it's not as bad as it seems).

#1 Jan 06th, 5:52pm

I like the way you portray her as a bad ** kinda girl I do feel sorry for her moter though, is there anything else you want to add?

#2 Jan 07th, 5:23am . Edited Jan 07th, 5:23am

I don't quite see her so much as bad ** ** I do picture her just straight determined to get her way and stubborn about it. She's kinda innocent when held against the examples of others around her (many of them murderers, thieves and whores/rapists).

#3 Jan 07th, 1:51pm

You delve into a mad mans world, if you odnt mind my say so.

#4 Jan 08th, 12:46pm

Now you know how twisted my mind has been for the past, um ... *counts* ... nine years. O_O _ wow ... it's been that long and I haven't quit. Yay me! ^_^

#5 Jan 08th, 8:12pm

Congrats.

#6 Jan 09th, 9:55am

COOL! Veng’s soul mate. Neat. I get the gist of her history, but it was kinda hard to follow. You might consider re-writing it so that it slows down some. That would make it easier to understand.

The whole feel of it is kinda twisted, but in a way I’ve never encountered before and for that reason, it’s both refreshing and original.

#7 Jan 17th, 6:35am

The history, while complete in my memory, was kinda jotted down on the fly. It doesn't really come into the story so much, but I'll certainly be re-writing it.

The whole feel of it is kinda twisted, but in a way I’ve never encountered before and for that reason, it’s both refreshing and original.

Thank you. Could you perhaps point out a particular piece that you think is most twisted? Just so I have an idea of where you're coming from.

#8 Jan 22nd, 9:32pm

The first bit of twisted-ness I think was that you indicated that the men who attack her in the desert would probably have killed and /then/ raped her. Then I guess the variations of the human race is mind boggling enough to me and then when you contemplate sex and romance with these not-so-human species…

Does that answer it?

#9 Jan 24th, 6:31am

I'm wondering. Have you read my story on here? It only has four chapters up, but there's everything I've mentioned in it. You'd soon see that I don't place much boundaries on it (there's murder and rape in the first chapter). Although, I don't actually discribe them in the actual act, the implication is there. I certainly wouldn't say it's anything but a story for adults, 13+ at the minimum.

The two men are the ... extreme end of the group I refer to as Rogues. To be fair, one wants to kill and the other wants to rape, they just aren't too fussed who does what first. They're a sort of example of how the lustful god has twisted some Rogues way of thinking (and yes, this is the same god that had Veng under his control during his younger years).

#10 Jan 24th, 2:28pm

Rudersovgy

I havent been able to find time to take a read, but I will say im impressed with the idea and will definetly read it at somepoint in my life.

#11 Jan 25th, 8:55am

I'll make a note that the story is on fpc, but honestly I don't know when I'll have time to R&R. There are a good number of people and stories I'd love to take a look at but time does not permit. (As you can no doubt tell by the slowness with which I reply here on the forums.)

#12 Jan 25th, 11:28am

Rudersovgy: Thank you. ^_^

DreamWeaver: It's okay if you don't have the time, I know the feeling. So many stories + Too little time = @_@ followed by X_X

Actually, that reminds me. I need to update what I have on here, it's been through it's first edit.

#13 Jan 25th, 7:08pm

Your welcome!

#14 Jan 26th, 1:31am

That's an excellent way to put it...Ah, school. If it wasn't around the free time would abound. Nonetheless, your story is on my to-do list and I might get around to it...some day.

#15 Jan 26th, 7:30am

As will I! I assure you.

#16 Jan 26th, 10:22am

MiniRuddyandfriends: Urgh, I'm so blind. I completely missed the congrats you gave me. Tch, I seriously need to focus on one thing at a time.

Anyways ... Thank you ^_^

#17 Jan 29th, 7:21pm

Rudersovgy

Any time!

#18 Feb 01st, 9:05am

Along with the Veng picture, I also found the Lasil one. Link: http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m238/assassin_21/lasil_angel2.gif

Her hands aren't the best (have a major problem with hands, they're too fiddly for me. Then again, I do prefer to write instead of draw ;))

This image is taken straight from a piece I was typing one day so, if you're wondering about the writing: she's showing off her new dress. For those that wanna know what's up with the wings: consider it a sneak preview as to what happens in the sequel. Seeing that I already have two species with feathered wings: my angels have fairy wings.

#19 Feb 28th, 2:41pm

Rudersovgy

Sounds interesting! Your pic looks very good!

#20 Feb 29th, 9:09am

Lasil looks more like what I would expect. The creativeness you've put into these characters is very impressive.

#21 Feb 29th, 11:35am

Rudersovgy: Thank you ^_^ took me days to do (mostly the dress). The sequel has a lot of strange things happening, all starting with the gods disappearing and ending with them er ... coming back ;)

DreamWeaver: Thank you too ^_^ Nice to know I can get the right image into someone else's mind.

#22 Feb 29th, 8:42pm