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Topic: Character : Tristin Darr
( This was tons of fun so I decided to do it again with a different character from a different story .)

NAME:Tristin Darr

AGE:17 ( but soon to be changed to 19)

RACE:Human

LOOKS:Average height , pixie cut chestnut brown hair , pale freckled skin , hazel eyes .( This is not mentioned any where on my posted story on Fp but this how she looks )

WEAPONS: Weapons ? Uh she could arrested for that . So no weapons .

ALIGMENT: With Sage , then Gordon , then Sage again . Wow talk about indecisive .

LIKES: Rock music ,spending time with her family , spending time with herself ,reading , and well just doing plane nothing .Oh yah loves being a pain in the you know what .

DISLIKES: Taco Bell , Ketchup , homeless people ( they scared her after a not so friendly run in ), being

lied to and used and when people get snippy with her .Oh and she hates giant bunnies at the current moment , she'll never eat Tricks again .

HISTORY:Pretty straight forward kind of history , nothing traumatic unless you count the fire she was in when she was but 'yay high' . Shes lived with her parents all her life , has one older brother whom designs computer software . Hasn't seen her moms side of the family for a good

7 or 8 years ( possibly longer)until her grandfather dies .

Need to knows : Tristin is definitely straight up human and will always be straight up human , she is just like you and me . Her world is exactly like ours , in fact it is ours but , um with a twist . What makes her so extraordinary is the fact that she stumbled across a talking frog one day and with a kiss POOF he turns into a human and thats when all the fantsy-like things begin .

#1 Mar 10th, 6:29am
DreamWeaver010
I’m thrilled that you had fun with your previous character, but like the first, this one leaves something to be desired. The poor grammar and punctuation make it hard to read through, and honestly, I feel that the description could really be fleshed out.
#2 Mar 11th, 6:47am

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