Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
acriter's Forums » RP Citadel of Elarope Topic Subscription

Forums » RP Citadel of Elarope » The Gatehouse
Author Post
acriter
Topic: The Gatehouse
Philip sat in the gatehouse staring at the cards he had been dealt. He felt sure that Rick had cheated him again but he wasn't sure... He had watched so carefully but it seemed that it was impossible for him to land such low scoring cards three times in a row.

"Right. That's it Rick. Tell me how you do it, you won't be able to cheat me again because I'm not going to play with you again."

Rick smiled his wicked smile and laughed. "What makes you think you've been cheated Philip? Is it just the knowledge that you are very bad at playing cards that makes you such a sore sportsman? Remind me when was the last time you won, even when you dealt? Lets not go into such trivial details, shall we?"

Philip ground his teeth and decided that he needed a breath of fresh air even though the rain was pelting down outside.

"See you in a minute. Rick." With this he shoved his helmet on his head, grabbed his spear and stopped out to the sound of Rick's laughter.

#1 Jun 02nd 2007, 12:56pm
Girlbrainiac
((Okay, she lives in the city, so she's already inside the walls. Whether the guard knows her already is up to you. Some do, some don't.))

Lana leaned against the wall of the gatehouse, only slightly protected from the elements here as the rain poured down. She was here to watch for the man that the guild was using as a courier. Name of Sharlek Mazvil, tall, always dresses as a beggar with a twitchy walk, carries twin daggers hidden in his boots, hides notes in his vest, dumb as a post. That was what she'd written in her journal.

She was getting rather soaked waiting for him here, though. She was highly tempted to call it a day and head back to her office, or home if that was how you chose to think of it... But she didn't. She was too stubborn for her own good sometimes, she thought wryly.

Idly, she gathered her mud brown hair, tied back as it was, and wrung it out.

#2 Jun 07th 2007, 6:22pm
acriter
Philip stepped outside, only to bump into a girl fiddling with her hair. Girls were so flimsy sometimes, he thought. Then she turned around and he saw she was tougher than he thought. Her other eye was covered by a patch and there was a dagger by her side. She sounded familiar to him but he couldn't quite place her. Probably belonged to the Thieves Guild or something.
#3 Jun 08th 2007, 6:27am
Girlbrainiac
((Heehee. 37 is hardly a "girl".))

Lana turned to the guard that had bumped into her with a smirk. "You could try watching where you're going," she said wryly. "Sure, that helmet probably impedes your vision, but still... Take it from someone who knows." She pointed to her eyepatch to make her point, then went back to watching the street, dark eye scanning the passersby looking for the familiar beggar with the twitchy walk.

#4 Jun 08th 2007, 9:55am . Edited Jun 08th 2007, 9:56am
acriter
[Sorry, wasn't really thinking there!]

Philip thought about arguing with this impertinant girl but remembering the dagger at her belt decided to let her be and to simply turn around and go back into the gatehouse, where he could be sure the only things he would lose were his money and his pride and not any part of his body.

#5 Jun 10th 2007, 2:56am
Girlbrainiac
The guard looked like he was about to say something, but he stopped, and turned to go back into the gatehouse. Lana raised an eyebrow at his back and smirked. 'Afraid to match wits with me?' she wondered.

She shivered, completely soaked through, and decided to put today up as a loss. After all, she wasn't exactly getting paid to follow this guy around, nor would it be a good idea to catch a cold in case somebody decided to stop by and offer her work. She wouldn't be a very good investigator if she had a nasty cold. Wouldn't be able to follow anyone if they kept hearing her coughing everywhere they went.

With a sigh, she headed off towards the docks, several miles to the east down city streets. It would take hours to get there because, always cautious for good reason, she tried to stick to either neutral territory between the several competing criminal organizations, or places that had more guards patrolling. She hadn't lived this long by being stupid.

((Continued in "The Streets"))

#6 Jun 10th 2007, 5:40am
acriter
Henas Jirrl wandered past the gatehouse before he saw a very soaked looking woman starting to walk away. She looked in need of cheering up but then he thought about himself getting recognised and the woman thinking he was courting her suit. It was all very difficult but he decided to follow her just to make sure she didn't chuck herself off a bridge somewhere or something. Of course, Henas didn't really think about the fact that he was one of the worse judges of character nature had ever made and that he had ignored all signs of danger which the mysterious woman had given off.

[Continues to streets]

#7 Jun 10th 2007, 12:04pm
can't post no more
In the shadows came another girl. She kept her special place in the dark and entered into the streets of this new world.
#8 Jun 15th 2007, 11:44am
Rudersovgy
Following her a Dark elf arrived...
#9 Jun 17th 2007, 12:19pm
acriter
Philip watched from the window of his gatehouse as all these strangers passed by, the city seemed to be even more dangerous than normal.
#10 Jun 19th 2007, 10:48am
Allirose
Reko absently nibbled on the string of his hat as he strode through the gateway. The place so far seemed to be quite different compared to the empty streets of his old city. Everywhere he turned a new face would pop up from seemingly nowhere. He grinned, "People!"
#11 Jul 28th 2007, 3:47am
Andrew Keith
Lorne passes through the gate and heads to the small keep/tower (whichever it is?) and greets the two familiar guards.

"I can tell by your faces that something's up, and not worry, I'll find out what. Remember, I'm a hunter" Lorne says to his acquaintances and ends with a wink, before he dons his hood and strolls to the streets.

[To the Streets!]

#12 Aug 03rd 2007, 12:46pm
Luicia and the voices
Kael ran through the gateway, his 'imaginary' friend Spyre running behind him,

"Run, boy, run!!!" Spyre wailed.

The dog was then bowled over by the guards.

#13 Aug 11th 2007, 4:34am
GreyStar Dreams
Raelee burst into tears as the guards swamped over her dog Tuggs. Though she had originally thought she had tied the poor beast up to stop him from attacking the villagers, the dog was here, in the flesh. "Tuggs, naughty!!" she wailed. Tuggs though, didn't hear her. Raelee continued to cry, tears streaming down her red and watery face. Without much thought, she then ran into the city to find an adult that will help her free her beloved dog from the guards.
#14 Aug 12th 2007, 2:17am
Scottish Princess
A young looking man trudged along the muddy streets and stopped in front of the gatehouse, leaning upon his spear-like weapon and letting his piercing green gaze rove over his surroundings.

"Pardon me." He called out to the guards. "What name is this fine city called by?"

While waiting for an answer, the man ran a callused hand through his oddly purple-tinted hair, hoping to get at least *some* of the water out.

#15 Oct 14th 2007, 1:41am
Andrew Keith
((I guess you want someone to play the guard?))

One of the guards stood up and leaned out the open window. "This 'ere is the Citadel of Elarope. Welcome."

#16 Oct 14th 2007, 4:08am
Scottish Princess
((Heh, yeah I suppose I could have done it myself but I'm lazy =P. Thanks))

The man nodded, "Elarope." The corner of his mouth turned up slightly, "Thank you."

He saluted the guard with his weapon and continued on his way through the city.

-I'll find you- He thought to himself. -And when I do, you'll wish you'd never known my father-

((Continued in The Streets))

#17 Oct 14th 2007, 7:32am . Edited Oct 14th 2007, 7:33am
echonymph
Arette slauntered through the gate, making the guards gape. She rolled her eyes. Human men. Waving sarcastically at them, she looked around for someplace to get out of street before someone assumed something that would get them killed.
#18 Oct 22nd 2007, 7:57pm
TwinDeath
Xaul darted through the gates, ignoring the guard's startled shouts and hurrying into the city. his face was known to a few guards, and he had no desire to spend any time in the local lockup. fading into an alley, he took to the rooftops, looking for a likely inn to find a drink and a job.
#19 Dec 14th 2007, 10:38am
Scottish Princess
Kali entered the city flashing a winning, albeit rather false, smile at the guards. She heard the uproar from the guards before she saw it and noted the dark shape who they were pursuing. 'Now he might be an interesting person to meet.' She mused, as she dashed off after him.
#20 Dec 14th 2007, 8:44pm
Danielle Thamasa
((Scotty, get on 1850 Scotland, please))
#21 Dec 14th 2007, 8:48pm
echonymph
Monique walked through the Gate like she owned the place. One of the guards gave her a lingiering, admiring glance. "Servant, gouge his eyes out," she said calmly, continuing to walk as behind her, the guard's screams rang out as her faithful chevalier obeyed her wishes.

She smiled. Now to find her DEAR cousin.

#22 Dec 15th 2007, 7:56pm . Edited Dec 15th 2007, 7:57pm
Scottish Princess
((goodness! Arette's in for a heck of alot of trouble))
#23 Dec 15th 2007, 7:57pm
Andrew Keith
((No kidding.))
#24 Dec 15th 2007, 8:04pm
echonymph
((Hehehe. Mine is an evil snicker))
#25 Dec 15th 2007, 8:04pm
Scottish Princess
((poor Arette......ANDREW! post in the Streets!))
#26 Dec 15th 2007, 8:05pm
Danielle Thamasa
Anya walked into the city, keeping her gaze on the ground, ignoring the guards and anyone else that happened to be around her. This was not where she had wanted to be. Then again, she hadn't wanted or asked to be different from the others. She looked around Elarope, wiped away the tears that were threatening to fall, and told herself that one day she would return to her home and they would wish they hadn't kicked her out.

((To the streets))

#27 Dec 17th 2007, 7:05pm
Rogue-writer-16
Seb sauntered through the gates and into the city, calling for his sister to ,

"Hurry up pumpkin, the man-candy ain't gonna wait forever!"

Lily rolled her eyes at her flamboyant sibling but giggled and hurried up, snatching up his hand and swinging their linked handsbetween them as they walked.

"Where are we headed?" she asked, ignoring the looks they drew from the crowd.

"Well have a looka round first, I guess." he answered with a twinkle in his eyes, "Onwrds!" he cried, almost poking some poor passer-by in the eye as he pointed forwards dramatically.

((To the Streets))

#28 Jan 01st, 4:17pm . Edited Jan 01st, 4:18pm
Andrew Keith
-Enter, Donny and the gang-

Donny and two rather well-kept and well-dressed members of his gang entered through the gatehouse, seeming like normal travelers. Donny lead them to the door into the actually gatehouse and peered in at the guards.

"Excuse me, sirs, is there anything special going on in the marketplace here?" He asked out-loud.

The two guards sitting around looked to him and walked over to the doorway. Three more came in through a door in the rear of the room, and the two at the gate looked at them curiously.

"Some exotic shops and merchants have came through, they might still be there." One guard answered.

"Ahh, thank you." Donny replied with a slight bow. As he did so, the man to his left leaned against the doorpane and put his left foot behind his right (like a person might when leaning against something), and tapped the ground seven times evenly, seeming to have just fidgeted.

In the brush nearby the gate the rest of the forty-man band waited, weapons ready.

"Seven guards." One stated as he saw the signal and turned to look at the few members of the gang he could see. "You all ready?" He asked.

((Dani, your choice where your character is. Could be with Donny and the other two at the gatehouse, or can be waiting in the brush.))

#29 Jan 02nd, 9:02am
Danielle Thamasa
Rommie fiddled witht he gauntlets on her arms as she looked around from a rooftop near the gatehouse, committing the details of her surroundings to memory. There were seven guards who were clueless so far as to what was about to happen. This day the gauntlets were more irritating than usual. But the discomfort was something she had to deal with so she didn't reveal her true nature. It was something she had been hiding for most of her life, thinking a normal life would be better. She had found a gang of people and formed a decent enough life.

Which led to the current moment. She was crouched on a rooftop with her sais ready and her throwing daggers within an easy reach if they were needed. Anytime she wished, she could throw one and hit whatever target she wanted, having honed her skills to an expert level. Rommie glanced over at Donny to see what would happen now.

#30 Jan 02nd, 6:01pm
Andrew Keith
The third member of the party that entered the town with Donny immediately ran off into the citadel, watching for any witnesses, which luckily, none around on this quiet side of the city except for a noble looking at the man with disgust, and so Giles, the man, drew his axe and chopped down the noble.

The guards immediately ran out and after Giles as he cut the noble down, and Donny and the other man drew their sabers, cutting down the nearest two guards.

Several arrows and handaxes whistled through the air, cutting down three more guards and the rest of the band ran for the citadel entrance. The last guard stood in the doorway and held his pike at the ready. Through a door that wasn't noticed before, five more guards came through and heard the commotion, and quickly ran to support their comrade. The gang crashed at the windows and walls, trying to get in but the guards stabbed their pikes through the small holes the gang would find.

"Quickly lads!" Donny bellowed, getting a bit worried as he continued searching the street for witnesses.

#31 Jan 02nd, 6:39pm
Danielle Thamasa
Rommie, seeing the arrival of more guards put her sais away and pulled out her throwing knives, saving the sais for later use. She waited for a clear line of view and tossed the knives with expert speed and aim towards two of the guards.

((They should hit but they're your guards so...))

#32 Jan 02nd, 6:53pm
Andrew Keith
One guard Rommie aimed for was running across, and so took both knives. One in the leg stopped him and the second went through his neck, the spine more particularly. He immediately fell and the remaining guards began to panic as arrows and axes came flying through at them, cutting down another two. The gang broke in and cut down the remaining guards.

"Alright, let's move." Donny said and the gang cleared out and into a nearby alleyway, Donny at the lead.

Four archers walked past Rommie as they went for the gutter and slid down before rushing across the street to follow. Two of them climbed up on the roofs on the opposite side of the street and followed the gang, keeping an eye out overhead.

((To the Streets.))

#33 Jan 02nd, 6:57pm . Edited Jan 02nd, 6:58pm
Danielle Thamasa
Adjusting her gauntlets and pulling her sais out, Rommie darted across the rooftops, following the gang and keeping her eyes opened as she further memorized the layout of the city.

((To The Streets))

#34 Jan 02nd, 7:00pm
Danielle Thamasa
Sage trudged into the city, looking around curiously as he noticed no one standing watch at the gatehouse. He opened the gate himself to find a number of guard bodies laying about. Walking to the nearest one he knelt down, checking for signs of life. His father's words echoed through his mind. 'You are a healer, one who helps others. You are not meant to kill.'

Then he stood up. The guard was dead. Quickly he walked from one to the next checking for any survivors but found none. He had to wonder if raiders had attacked here as well. With a sigh he continued to walk, heading down the street.

((To the Streets))

#35 Jan 14th, 6:02pm
Wolflord
Elsoku and Santen looked on curiously at the dead guards before frowning. Something had happened here and they were going to find out what.

A gust of wind passed by them and when it stopped they were gone.

( To the streets.)

#36 Jan 20th, 11:19am
Allirose
Enter Athen Otheryn

Athen trudged through the gateway, dragging a small fishing rod behind him. It hadn't always been like this. All this trudging. If he could sleep he would have, but....

Well, those fish looked healthy enough. And it might have been helpful if someone had told him that eating one would result in horrid convulsions of the bowels.

But that was then, this is now. Now he was in a new city. What was it... Ellabel... Elarina... Elarope? Yes, Elarope. That was it. And what a city it was. Athen soaked up the details through heavy eye-lids. Bustling people, shops, pubs and a few warehouses -probably homes to gangs or something of the such-.

He was just through the gateway, but something caught his eye. Two things caught his eye.

Two guards were stationed side by side next to a wall. And they were staring. Wide-eyed stares like the ones a little girl would have if she saw a very cute puppy.

But these guards weren't little girls. And Athen was no puppy.

Athen growled, but averted his gaze, eyes trained on the cobblestones. But out of the corner of his eyes, the wide-eyed stares of the guards followed him.

Just staring. Constant, wide-eyed stares.

Athen turned towards the sky and tried to quicken his pace. The sky. Yes, the sky. Humans seemed to like talking about the sky....

And yet the guards stared on.

Athen twitched and halted and then slowly turned to stare back at the guards. He glared. "What?" He groaned, "Am I obliged to talk to you or something?"

Suddenly one of the guards blinked and his eyes shot skywards. "Ah! Nice sky today right, Frankie?" He sharply nudged his partner in the ribs, who jumped, blinked and then quickly joined his companion in sky-staring.

"Why yes, Gerard! What a lovely sky! Sun and everything! And it's so blue!"

Athen growled and padded deeper into the citadel, the voices of the blabbering guards fading into the crowds. Athen retreated into the streets.

Once he was gone, Gerard finally looked down from the sky and frowned. "You know what?" He asked Frankie. Frankie shrugged. "Well it would be damn nice if they just tried to talk to us, right? Just to be polite and all." Frankie nodded. "I mean," Gerard continued, "Name on person who has asked us how our day has been!"

Frankie scrunched up his face for a moment, "Dundee?" Gerard threw his arms into the air.

"Dundee asks EVERYONE that! 'How is your day' is the only bloody common he can speak!" Frankie grimaced.

"What? No, he speaks common..." He turned behind him and waved to another guard wearing an odd, lopsided wide-brim hat, sandals and holding a bottle marked "XXXX". "Oi! Dundee! How's your kid?"

Dundee waved back and yelled. "Orright! But the little anklebiter almost got 'imself stolen by a dingo, moite! Can't ferget the 'roos either! Bloody 'roos an' dingos tryin' ta steal moi boibee, moite--"

Gerard threw his halberd to the floor, "CAN’T YOU AT LEAST TRY AND SPEAK COMMON, YA BLOODY LOON?!”

((Edit: TO THE STREETS! :P))

#37 Mar 18th, 2:42am . Edited Mar 18th, 2:47am
sckry
Inanna heard the commotion from the exasperated man as she approached the gate house. A wry smile crossed her lips as she heard the last remark.

'You're dreaming, mate.' she said to herself and laughed. This looked to be as an interesting city as the last one. Inanna was fairly sure she had seen bulky horned man with orange hair in the last tavern she had stopped at.

Slightly uplifted, she straightened her posture and strode down the cobbled pathway and into the citadel.

((And if you don't know where 'You're dreaming, mate' comes from, you're not a real aussie :)! ))

#38 Mar 22nd, 8:04pm
Scottish Princess
((more people from Australia! COOL! XD))
#39 Mar 22nd, 8:11pm
Allirose
((*Tackles* HUR!))
#40 Mar 23rd, 8:59pm
Scottish Princess
((*tries to wave from under Alli* hello to you, too))
#41 Mar 23rd, 9:07pm
Allirose
((:3 BAHA! *Shuffles to Off Topic*))
#42 Mar 23rd, 9:26pm
NicoletteContratto

Enter Eravel.

The day was slightly muggy and Eravel was already in a bad mood, so she didn't bother with a cloak to hide herself in. She figured that if people wanted to stare, they could stare. After traveling for days without a decent, intelligent companion, she was beginning to feel as if the entire world was full of morons. Morons and people who couldn't keep their eyes off her.

She rolled her eyes in disgust, trying to think to herself that she would be just as unhappy with the stares if she was hiddeous, instead of stunning. Out of the corner of her eye she noticed two guards who seemed slightly dumbfounded, and maybe a tad eager.

All they got from her, though, was a snide smirk before she walked away without a second glance.

((To The Streets!))

#43 Apr 21st, 6:15pm . Edited Apr 21st, 6:17pm
Reine Ayten

Reine smirked. The sun was gone today, so he was very happy. If it hadn't been, he'd have to go in by nightfall, and he really hated having to pass the guards at night. They were always so bloody twitchy, and had trigger- or more likely, string- happy fingers!

Yeah. He hated going in by night.

As he sauntered by, one of the guards snickered about how he was so small for a traveller. Of course, Reine being who he is, the man had a dagger poised at his throat in the next two seconds.

"Would you like to say that again, my dear sir?" Reine asked sarcasticely. The man shook his head. Reine left then, having fed only ten minutes earlier. Bloody hell, he thought, as he walked through the gates. That cow was good...

{To the streets, I guess}

#44 Jun 12th, 4:40pm
Bibliomancer

After quite a few days of walking, Edward spotted a gatehouse.

"Where there's a gate," he said, "there's a town." He walked over to the gatehouse and noticed two guards.

"Ooh, I love men in uniform!" Edward said. When he approached them, however, his hopes were greatly lowered.

"Uh, never mind," Edward said. "Excuse me, but where am I?"

"This is the city of Elarope, good sir," responded a guard.

"Thanks, darling," Edward said, walking through the gates.

[To the Streets!]

#45 Jun 20th, 6:08pm
elementelmaster

A boy was walking around, "Oh dear I'm lost..." he muttered and saw a gate to the city. "E-Excuse me sir." he said, "Umm can I come in?" he asked one of the guards, "Sure kid whatever." He nodded and said, "Thank you." and went inside.

#46 Jun 20th, 9:19pm
elementelmaster

A girl wearing a red hooded cloak walked along. She had her face hidden but you could catch glimpses of her hair, "Why hello." she said to the guards. The guards just looked at her, "May I come in?" they just shrugged and let her in. "Thank you." she walked past them.

#47 Jun 23rd, 7:16am
Bibliomancer

Ignatius approached the gatehouse. He asked one of the guards. "Excuse me?" he said. "But did a young man with blond hair with a pink streak come by here?"

"Oh, yeah," the guard replied. "That pansy?! Yeah, he floated on down into town, the poofter!"

Ignatius unsheathed the Blade of Light, pushed the guard against the wall, and brought the Blade against his neck.

"What did you call him?!" Ignatius shouted, before releasing the guard and walking into town.

((To the Streets! And to Edward!))

#48 Jun 23rd, 11:35am
elementelmaster

This time...A small boy wearing a deep yellow robe walked up to the guards and looked at him. He gave them a smile and just like that he enetered the guards standing their dazed.

#49 Jul 04th, 10:47am

Moderator(s): acriter, Andrew Keith,
Rule(s):
  1. Forums are not to be used to post stories.
  2. All discussions, language and content, must be suitable for teens.
  3. The owner/moderator(s) of this forum is solely responsible for content posted within this area.
  4. All forum abuse must be reported to the moderator(s).
Members:
  1. Forum admin/moderator
  2. Fanatic (on site for more than 2 years)
  3. Fan (on site for more than a year)
  4. Regular (on site for more than 6 months)
  5. Camper (on site for more than a month)
  6. Apprentice (on site for more than a week)
  7. Newbie (on site for less than a week)

All times are GMT -8, US Pacific Time Zone.
Return to Top