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Violet Rose Y.
Topic: Luck Is a Curse (need reviews)
Holly is dating the “High School King”, Patrick Stone, which is less glamorous as it seems. She changes everything about her personality and appearance just to fit his every want and need. Now the only thing she wants is her life back, but there are rules to stop her from that. No one dumps Patrick Stone. Never. He keeps you until he looses interest in you. He dumps you, never the other way around.

Cassandra, a sleek brunette with an evil charm of her own befriends Holly and catches the eye of Patrick. It doesn't take her long to get the code: Date Patrick Stone and gain untouchable popularity. And that is exactly what she will do, but Cassandra is not willing to play by Patrick's rules.

While Holly is running from high school royalty as fast as she can, Cassandra is running toward it. In the end, one will regret their decision.

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Not your normal Teen fic and teen problems. They are real but hardly ever are discussed. I want to get this published and the future and need feed back! PLease help me! I only have 1 review! :(

#1 Jul 23rd 2007, 9:43am
Susannah Simon
of course i'll review your story!

it sounds really interesting and i can't wait to read it.

i have a rule though, in order for me to review your story, you have to review mine. :D i'm so evil.

if you're interested, i'd like more reviews for "anna". i'm looking to get it published and it would really help me to get more reviews.

thanks!!

#2 Jul 23rd 2007, 12:24pm
lestatlover
Hey that sounds pretty cool. I only have one review too from my story A Safe Place, that's also a teen drama. I really, really want to get published in the future cause writing is my passion. I'll so read your story and maybe you could also read mine? I think you'd enjoy it! :)
#3 Aug 11th 2007, 2:59pm
Arianna Cliz
Hey, I know you don't know me, but I'm thinking about asking to join this forum and your story caught my eye. I love it! It's really different without being so radical no one can relate. I wouldn't mind if you read some of my poetry, but hey, I'm not stopping you! I've got writers block right now, so some ideas would be helpful too!

Hope this gets published and you get famous!

#4 Mar 14th, 4:05pm

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