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TwilightZelda
Topic: I would like to know what people think of my story

Hi! I'm writing a story called "Keeping the Secret". I love wriitng it but not many people are reviewing it so I'm not too sure about things I need to work on in the future. It's fantasy with a main homosexual couple in it. Don't worry, it doesn't have sex all over the place. There is a lot of plot in it. The rating is "M".

The summary? Bernard, a half merman, is forced to live on an island where the merfolk drown humans for sport along with a father who wishes to kill him. As the body count rises on the beach, Bernard might have to stain his hands with blood to escape the island. M/M

I'll review stories too if someone reviews mine. I'm often busy so try not to expect a review so soon. Thank you!

#1 May 05th, 11:20am

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