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R.E.D. the animator
Topic: What's up with Jon?!
Okay... I'm kinda new to this forum thing, sooooooo... here it goes.

I thought it would be good to start by talking about Jon, because it seems that he is vital to the plot some how. When the story began, I suspect that Jon was secretly trying to find a way to stop Kenzi. But now as Jon continues to mercylessly kill people without a second thought.

That's my view at the momment.

#1 Jul 10th 2007, 5:40pm
Reaper
Yeah. I mean, in the first one, Jon appears as more of a lover than a fighter, now he's some all knowing bad ass. What's up with that?
#2 Jul 12th 2007, 12:05am
R.E.D. the animator
It seems that Jon first got his killing instinct back when he first had to kill that ninja dude in the first book. Ever since then, killing doesn't seem to be much of a problem for him.
#3 Jul 12th 2007, 7:47am
TT-da-lamanite
well thanks for the bad ass comment.....
#4 Sep 25th 2007, 5:51am
TT-da-lamanite
but, you have to think about it...when you are forced to kill to survive; one might go thru some changes i.e. the first book and once you learn how to do it...its pretty damn hard to forget...now when a person is fighting for something....he will do just about anything to make sure that the Ideal, or whatever he is fighting for...wins,

so before you judge the charature make sure you know what he is fighting for....

#5 Oct 04th 2007, 5:33am
R.E.D. the animator
Yes, yes quite true. But you have to remember that I didn't know Jon's (That's you) intentions when I made that last comment. So while I asumed that Jon (You again) had anouther aganda, I had no way of knowing what he was planning. And seeing how he didn't instantly unite with the rebellon, I only assumed that his intentions must not be good.

P.S. I started my first "real" story. (Attack of the killer shrimp dosent count) I only have chapter one up at the moment, but perhaps a review from my sixth favorate writer, (oh wait, I forgot about Jadeisms. Make that seventh) would modivate me to update faster.

#6 Oct 04th 2007, 9:11am
TT-da-lamanite
If you put me higher on that list maybe but until then dont exactly expect me to be overly supportive....
#7 Nov 12th 2007, 5:25am
R.E.D. the animator
I would move you up if you were to update your stories more. I'll tell you what, I'f you add a new chapter to anything, I might move you up to fourth... mabey third.
#8 Nov 12th 2007, 5:47am
TT-da-lamanite
Okay then thats how its going to be, thats how its going to BE!
#9 Nov 28th 2007, 6:31am
Malise Ling
it needs three *'s...what where we talking about again?
#10 Mar 08th, 9:56pm
Diane Hawk
You're trying to make yourself too BA, so Kenzi and I toned it down a bit...

We decided parts of the story were quite impossible, so changing some things to make the story more believible and scarier...

It's my job...

#11 Mar 14th, 6:40pm
TT-da-lamanite
fine...just know that I am not entertained...
#12 Mar 26th, 11:33am
TT-da-lamanite
and that is why I am here...
#13 Mar 26th, 12:04pm

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