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Race: Half Human Half Elf

Special Abilities: Secretly an evil Sorceress

Bio: Princess Alina is the only daughter of the dying Qeen Arwen and King Aragorn.Her older brother was killed by a 'stray' arrow therefore making her the next in line. Alina has put a spell on the original fellowship, making them all love her and making them completely useless. She has a plan for Middle Earth....and it will be set in motion once she takes the throne.

Name: Veowyn (pronounced liek Eoywn only with a V!)

Race: Half elf half human.

Special abilitys: she can walk silently, hit a bullseye from 600ft away with any weapon she chooses to throw. rides horses. Has magick

Bio: Veowyn is the daughter of Eaomer and his elvish wife valadhel. (a fanfiction I'm working on) She is the last linage of the Lorein elves and was raised in Rohan. She was once friends with alina but is now gathering forces to lead a rebellion against her. She speaks all elvish tounges and many animal. she knows some magick.

Name: Zukula

Race: Elf

Weapon: Bow and arrow, sword, dagger

Special Abilities: Is as good as Veowyn at shooting, knows all languages, knows enough magic to help the rebellion

Bio: Zukula is the long lost sister of Arwen, she is not effected by her nieces magic and is pretty much Veowyn's best friend. She grew up with her and they are like sisters.

Alina is hit by several laser blasts to the head, decapitated, and has the cadaver thrown into Mount Doom.

Veowyn has a fragmentation grenade blast it into small bits, which the organic meatbags known as 'orcs' quickly digest.

Zukula is terminated by a 12.7mm bullet tearing through her chest, and other exploding her head.

Statement: You have been terminated by HK-74 of the Sue Hunters' Society.

Until I read the second-to-last post, I honestly thought yall were joking. If you aren't... well, let me just say, "WHY DO YOU ENJOY CREATING ABSOLUTELY CLICHED AND BORING CHARACTERS!?!!!" You're right, it would be safe from the Mary-Sue hunters... if it were original. Which it's not. PLEASE, go to Lord of the Rings on fanfiction and compare your "perfect and original" characters with some of the worst fanfictions available on there. Better yet, google PPC, Acacia, and Jay, and then read the solution some authors have come up with to prevent the MS epidemic.

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