Alina finished writing in her journal, "And now, thanks to my magic, all of the original Fellowship, including those hobbits, and most of the others in Middle Earth are completely useless against me. A change in Middle Earth is coming.... But first my 'beloved' parents must die." She put her journal in her bag and looked up at the darkening sky, a strom was brewing, her favorite kind of weather. She got more comfortable on the bench as she prepared to sit and think in the storm.

Dun dun dunnnn! Suddenly, a Nazgul rose from the earth, saying, "Ha! MY master is the evil one on Middle-Earth- you're just a fake pretender who is trying to use the ULTIMATE CLICHE- the inevitable drop-dead gorgeous/the most evil person around/the most graceful/the most powerful/has absolutely no flaws (except for evilness, OF COURSE- why can't she have incurably bad breath?)- to try to ruin canon and ultimately twist and wreak destruction on Tolkien's awesome characters. Then the Nazgul took the Mary-Sue in his claws, ripped her in half (with her intestines spilling out gruesomely, of course), and fed her to the Balrog. (And if you don't know what the Balrog is, you have neither read the books or seen the movies- SHAME!)

BTW, isn't this FICTIONPRESS? Why can't you post this on FANFICTION? Especially because you blatantly mention the Fellowship, hobbits, and Middle Earth in your coughORIGINALcough invented place. What, did you get chased off the fanfiction forums for extreme Mary-Suism? And if you're trying to claim that Middle- Earth is your own invention, prepare to be sued for copyright infringement. I'm just pointing that out. Now, go and invent a character who IS NOT the most important one in whatever she does. And if you can't, get prepared for a lot more flames like this one, b/c you will not have improved as a writer AT ALL, which is, of course, the entire point of fanfiction and fictionpress. Cheerio! Improve your skills now- or Miss Camilla will delight in taking you under her wing. (To understand Camilla reference, visit OFUM- aka the Official Fanfiction Academy of Middle-earth)

dude so what is your problem? So what it isn't any of your business. Did you evr think that maybe they didn't kniow about fanfiction? Where you too worried about the imperfection, in your eyes of their charector to evan notice that this person could not know about it? or maybe it was the fact that they put middle earth on Fiction press. well like you said youself Fiction press and fanfiction are to improve writing skills who made you God? Who told you that you could tell them how mary-sueish and tell them were and were not to post and tell them they can't write better?

If you are too retarded to look at the other, previous posts I made on the other topics in this forum, I'm not going to waste my time talking to you. Many things become clear when you do a little research.