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Rimma
Topic: The Art of Deception
This story was published a while back, but I just finished it this past week or so. I'm really proud of it, but I think it's kind of rough and I'd like some constructive criticism, please. The title is The Art of Deception.

I'm game for reviewing others' stories, as well.

If you happen to read my story and enjoy it, then I'm writing a semi-sequel called Double Crosser that you might be interested. Anyways, thanks in advance for any and all help.

#1 Oct 19th 2007, 9:25pm

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