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Topic: Nocte Yin: AHWB [Ch. 14 Preview]
Christmas is coming , and be rest assured that Chapter 14 will be up this Friday (December 21, 2007).

But here's a preview of what I have right now. Hope you guys will love it! :D

[Please note that the preview here is different than the one in my LiveJournal (http://t-h-e-p-o-i-n-t.livejournal.com/)]

. . .

She then remembered that she was ill – very ill.

“I hope you die.”

It was a female voice, spoken relentlessly and without pity.

Nocte blinked and, straining, turned her head. All at once she was aware of her surroundings and the people around her.

She was at Hero Academy – everything was working out.

Her breath caught when she saw Aman – sweet, selfless Aman – asleep, head cushioned in her arms on the bed while her knees braced the floor. The African, hair in small braids and bound back, was snoring softly. Nocte noted that her friend now had five piercings: two on one ear and three on the other.

At the foot of the bed was Měi Fèng curled up like a cat, muttering in her sleep. A quilt covered the princess and Nocte thought it foolish of her to sleep at her feet when there was another bed in the room.

The other bed was not empty. In fact, Nocte chilled at the sight of him. Blonde hair, one blue eye, one green eye, a soft smile and a giant scythe. He peered at her, as if he knew of her dream.

But it hadn’t been Aman who had spoken, not Měi Fèng, and certainly not the reaper. No, it hadn’t been them. It had been Sterling.

Cold, seething Sterling with her long blonde hair and piercing blue eyes. Her left eye, paler than the other, had vertical scar that was starkly white against her pale skin. Her arms were crossed and her lips were drawn to a distasteful frown.

But meeting her eyes did not make Nocte flinch. In fact, she felt like she deserved the icy glare – deserved to be hated – because she was a murderer – because she had killed Noir.

#1 Dec 16th 2007, 12:45pm . Edited Dec 16th 2007, 12:51pm

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