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CJ1985

Hi there. I have a story that I've been working on for several years. It's finished, but i'm always going back and changing things I dislike. It's called "codename:zack"

The story deals with a top-secret Government Facility, and I haven't been able to come up with a name. It's always been "The Facility" A terrible name, I know. Any suggestions on a new name I can give the place? It's supposed to be very top-secret and mysterious.

Thanks.

8/01/2012 #1
M.R. Hill

I personally like The Facility. It's nice & simple, doesn't try to overcomplicate things or be unnecessarily clever. Plus for something top-secret and mysterious, just calling it by that basic name helps.

If you really want to change it, giving it an Area number or such could help. I'd also suggest looking into the names of real life places like that and see what others have come up with for inspiration.

8/01/2012 #2
Professor Games

Why not "The Z.O.N.-Zero On Network " or how about use a a place name?

8/06/2012 #3
zombsigner

i got a characterbwho ive been calling robert cere bellum for a while now, but the problem is he's hindi-indian, with albino hair, born in the 1750's in colonial america,

son of a hindi fish merchant father and an albino human-like ET. A witty and smart intellectual, but denied by most of the local scholars because of his strange appearance.

11/14/2012 #4
zombsigner

i got a characterbwho ive been calling robert cere bellum for a while now, but the problem is he's hindi-indian, with albino hair, born in the 1750's in colonial america,

son of a hindi fish merchant father and an albino human-like ET. A witty and smart intellectual, but denied by most of the local scholars because of his strange appearance.

11/14/2012 #5
zombsigner

i got a characterbwho ive been calling robert cere bellum for a while now, but the problem is he's hindi-indian, with albino hair, born in the 1750's in colonial america,

son of a hindi fish merchant father and an albino human-like ET. A witty and smart intellectual, but denied by most of the local scholars because of his strange appearance.

11/14/2012 #6
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