FictionPress  |   let the words flow    Mobile
Browse
Just In
Communities
Forums
Betas
Action: The How To
Discover how to do action from the knowledge of us all. Learn things, like weapon names or types, how stuff works, how to finish an event, or work out cool names for your characters! All are welcome to ask questions and help others out!
New Topic . Follow Forum . Topic Subscription
Forums » Action: The How To » Help
Post
Sergei V
I started a story, 'Life in the Red Mafia', with what I thought was a pretty original idea. Nobody is reading it and when they do they dont go past chapter one. Could u plz read it and tell me how to improve future chapters and how to get them past chapter one? Thank you!!!
6/28/2007 #1
Keefin
I started a story to and would like help its found at It's found at http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2407920/1/
8/28/2007 #2
Keefin Bickmore

The story above is poorly written unless you want a laugh read my new story Amazon.

3/24/2009 #3
Forum Moderators: WyrdWolf
Rules:
  • Forums are not to be used to post stories.
  • All forum posts must be suitable for teens.
  • The owner and moderators of this forum are solely responsible for the content posted within this area.
  • All forum abuse must be reported to the moderators.
Membership Length: 2+ years 1 year 6+ months 1 month 2+ weeks new member
All times are in UTC-8 US PST Time Zone.