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![]() I started a story, 'Life in the Red Mafia', with what I thought was a pretty original idea. Nobody is reading it and when they do they dont go past chapter one. Could u plz read it and tell me how to improve future chapters and how to get them past chapter one? Thank you!!! 6/28/2007 #1 |
![]() I started a story to and would like help its found at It's found at http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2407920/1/ 8/28/2007 #2 |
![]() The story above is poorly written unless you want a laugh read my new story Amazon. 3/24/2009 #3 |
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