alright...well....i wrote a story (duh) and i need some help. i dont know if i want to post the rest of it. so far i just posted a small part of it (the prologue)...personally i think this story is very good...the two main characters in it are real-very, very real...my girlfriend and myself actually...lol

anyway...heres the link... http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2517404/1/ so please go review!!! once i start getting reviews i will post more and more =) i hope you like it...thanks =)

-Demena

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