Mainly my story is centered in 1180 Japan on an Island. The main Character is Shun, who I based off my older brother. Everyone in the story that is "named" is based on someone in my life. Anyway, the story basically tells about how Shun is dealing with the fact that his sister, Kumiko, aka me, has died. It goes on into some detail of what led up to her death, how she died, and how Shun in handling it afterward.

I am a blunt and sometimes brutal person when it comes to criticism, so to be fair, I expect all types of criticism on my story. Be blunt! Be brutal if you must! But please be honest. I'm seriously thinking about a career in writing.

Sankyu!

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