Um, I've been writing a vampire story (obvious) Well, it's a first for me, and I've been having a hard time getting constructive feedback about it. If people would read it please and give me some, it would be much appreciated. I want to be able to fix it before it ends up too in the dark depths of no return.

I'd also love to read any stories anyone else has in return. I'm out of good supernatural stories lately.

I'll gladly read and try to help

thank you very much.

Holy crap! I think I just figured out how to post....maybe....

I am so sorry that I haven't had a chance to get to it, life's been hectic. But I promise I'm heading over right now to get to it. :)

I am so sorry that I haven't had a chance to get to it, life's been hectic. But I promise I'm heading over right now to get to it. :)

Yeah I'll read it for you...

Yep I'll have a read. Do you want comments on anything in particular?

• Forums are not to be used to post stories.
• All forum posts must be suitable for teens.
• The owner and moderators of this forum are solely responsible for the content posted within this area.
• All forum abuse must be reported to the moderators.