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Topic: The Review Game: Poems - Easy Fix
This is the place to come if you want reviews for a poem, and the review type is "easy fix", aka a simple review.

For Review Game rules, go to "Read this first!".

Moving on, this is the basic structure of the Review Game:

Person 1 says: Review "My Lucky Dream"!

Person 2 says: Ok, I reviewed it. So can the next person please review "Stereotypes" or "Window"?

Person 3 says: Done (I did "Window"), so can the next person review "Stranger"? Thanks.

This means the first one to post here doesn't have to review another person. Aka, first to come gets a freebie. So, hurry!

For Poem Easy Fix, your review needs to fulfill these requirements, otherwise you will not be seen as someone who has fulfilled their obligation and you can thus not participate.

REVIEW REQUIREMENTS:

You need to state one thing you liked and *why*, and one thing you didn't like/could be improved, and *why*. Giving more feedback is not prohibited, but giving less than this is. Flaming is also prohibited. Being constructive is not.

If you absolutely can only find good or less good things to say, then please state two things you liked and *why*, or two things you didn't like and *why*. The review will be seen as invalid otherwise.

LET THE GAMES BEGIN!

#1 Nov 11th 2007, 10:35am . Edited Mar 02nd, 6:04am
Sercus Kaynine
Wow, it looks like I'm the first to post! Hmm... I don't have any specific requests right now, but I've only got a couple of poems written. A review for any of them would be nice.
#2 Nov 11th 2007, 6:30pm
A Perfect Sonnet
Hi! I reviewed The Sercus. Would someone review Our Algebra for me? Thank you!
#3 Nov 12th 2007, 1:27pm
Imalefty
done our algebra.

just posted "a self tour" and would appreciate someone taking a look. :) thanks!

-Lefty

#4 Nov 13th 2007, 6:09pm
fireblade
Reviewed A Self Tour.

Someone please review Shadows

#5 Jan 02nd, 11:26am
Esther Jade
I've reviewed "Shadows". I would appreciate someone having a looking at "Anger Redefined".
#6 Jan 15th, 10:56am
Sanity's Brink
I reviewed "Anger Redefined". Will someone please review "My beautiful love for you" "Wash away" or "Insane".
#7 Feb 18th, 10:08pm
Deets
I reviewed "Wash away". Can someone please review "Glass Coffin" or "Under the Electric lights"?
#8 Feb 20th, 7:42am
writingxonxwalls
I reviewed "Under the Electric Lights"

=)

Could someone please review "If He Knew" or "Fairytale"? Thanks so much!

-WxOxW

#9 Feb 21st, 8:17am
angel953
Hey I just reviewed "If He Knew".

can sombody come review "You Captured My Heart"?

thanks

~angel953

#10 Feb 21st, 8:33am
Sanity's Brink
I reviewed "You Captured My Heart."

Could somebody review either "Dawn," "Give Me A Rose," or "I Told Myself"? thanks.

#11 Feb 21st, 10:52am
angel953
I just reviewed "I Told Myself".

@Sanity's Brink: If you don't think I did good enough on the review bc I couldn't find something I didn't like, I would be glad to review something else. Just let me know and I'll get right on it.

As for my work, can somone please R&R either "I Love You, And That Will Never Change", "Mistake", or "Hero"?

thanks

~angel953

#12 Feb 21st, 11:10am
Deets
I reviewed Mistake. Can someone please R&R Glass Coffin (or Under the Electric Lights, I just reformatted it and added punctuation today)?
#13 Feb 21st, 11:27am
angel953
I reviewed Glass Coffin.

Can someone plz R&R "But It's Never Enough"?

Thanks

~angel953

#14 Feb 21st, 11:38am
writingxonxwalls
Reviewed "But It's Never Enough"

Great job angel953! =)

You can review whatever you please.

--WxOxW

#15 Feb 21st, 11:56am
angel953
i reviewed "The Art Of Being Rejected".

can someone plz R&R "Summer" or "Wedge"?

@WxOxW: thanks for the kind words and the review!!

thanks

~angel953

#16 Feb 21st, 12:07pm
writingxonxwalls
I reviewed "Summer"

Please review "I Trusted You" or "Hidden Plea"? Thank you so much!

Angel953-- Anytime! And same for you reviewing my stories!

--WxOxW

#17 Feb 21st, 3:17pm
angel953
I reviewed "I Trusted You". Could someone review "Letter From A Friend"?

Thanks

~angel953

#18 Feb 21st, 4:33pm
Sanity's Brink
I reviewed "Letter From A Friend". Could someone please review "All Was Well" or "Black"?
#19 Feb 21st, 5:22pm
writingxonxwalls
I reviewed "All Was Well".

awesome poem

=)

Could someone please review "Hidden Plea" or "The Art of Being Rejected"? Thanks so much!

--WxOxW

#20 Feb 21st, 5:46pm
angel953
I reviewed "Hidden Plea"

Can someone plz review either "Time" or "No Good Friend"?

Thanks

~angel953

#21 Feb 21st, 6:03pm
Deets
I reviewed Time. Can someone please review "The End of Sanity"?
#22 Feb 21st, 6:29pm
angel953
I reviewed "The End Of Sanity".

Can someone review "No Good Friend"?

Thanks

~angel953

#23 Feb 22nd, 6:27am
writingxonxwalls
Reviewed "No Good Friend"

Can someone review for me?

Whichever suits your fancy.

Thanks so much!

--WxOxW

#24 Feb 22nd, 7:57am
angel953
I reviewed"Boys Don't Matter".

Could someone review either "Make The Most Of The Inevitable", or "GoodBye"?

Thanks

~angel953

#25 Feb 22nd, 8:28am
Esther Jade
Done "Goodbye".

One of my "A Hard Holiday" poems (I have four - any one would be great), please.

Thanks!

#26 Feb 22nd, 9:35am
angel953
I reviewed "A Hard Holiday" (poem #2)

Can someone please review "Make The Most Of The Inevitable"?

Thanks

~angel953

#27 Feb 22nd, 11:55am
Sanity's Brink
I reviewed "Make the Most of the Inevitable" (really great poem xD )

Could someone review "Returning the Favor"? thanks.

#28 Feb 22nd, 12:41pm
Esther Jade
Done "Returning the Favour".

Any of my "A Hard Holiday" poems, please.

Thanks.

#29 Feb 22nd, 12:53pm
Landon Stray
I finished "A Hard Holiday". Can someone review "Only, Lonely, Lovely, Beautiful Girl" or "People"? Thanks.
#30 Feb 22nd, 1:38pm
fleur de l'est
Finished "Only, Lonely, Lovely, Beautiful Girl"

Could someone please review "Hang the Memories Up My Wall" please? Thank you!

#31 Feb 22nd, 3:03pm
doctor's diagnosis
I reviewed "Hang the Memories Up My Wall".

I know my concrit sounded a little strong, but I'd rather get a review telling me what to do better next time than something like "omg!!!11 that's so good/bad i loved/hated it!!!11"

why did you love/hate it?

Trust me, you are not bad.

Could someone review Little Vampires (http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2478980/1/) for me?

Or if you know, cutting really isn't your thing, I'll See You Again (http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2477668/1/) would be nice.

:)

Cheers,

Rachel.

#32 Feb 23rd, 9:08am
Esther Jade
Done "Little Vampires" - excellent poem. Subtle and well-structured.

One of the "A Hard Holiday" poems, please.

Thanks!

#33 Feb 23rd, 9:27am
ilovetheopera
I've reviewed the last poem of "A Hard Holiday". Appropriately titled.

since "leave/stay/wander?" is sadly unloved, i'd appreciate if someone could review that one- or "new age (saint) valentine".

thanks so much!

#34 Feb 24th, 1:24am
writingxonxwalls
Reviewed, "Leave, Stay, Wander?"

Loved the format!!

Could someone please review something of mine?

It doesn't matter, whichever suits your fancy.

Thanks so much!!

-WxOxW

#35 Feb 24th, 9:42am
doctor's diagnosis
I did "leave/stay/wander".

Good write, indeed.

Could someone do Boy?

#36 Feb 24th, 9:44am
doctor's diagnosis
I did "Hidden Plea" (for writtingxonxwalls).

Sorry about the whole repeating review thing.

So could someone do Boy or Addictions?

#37 Feb 24th, 9:52am . Edited Feb 24th, 9:53am
Fractured Illusion
-- OFF TOPIC --

@doctor's diagnosis : if you and the person above you reviewed the same thing, you should follow Rule 10 in the Read This First! topic. It deals with this issue.

So, by following that, ilovetheopera should do a make-up review to writingxonxwalls , while the next participant reviews you.

-- END OF OFF TOPIC --

Story to review: Boy or Addictions by doctor's diagnosis

#38 Feb 24th, 9:58am
ilovetheopera
i've done i trusted you! a bit too short for my taste, but alright.

sorry about the mix up, hope i did the correct thing!

#39 Feb 25th, 4:56am
Fractured Illusion
-- OFF TOPIC --

Yes, you did your make-up review, so all is good. Now,next time you post in a RG that is not about that you are playing, put it like I do, in an off topic place, and then state who is up for reviewing. Yeah, that's actually a rule :P (the last rule, I believe)

-- END OF OFF TOPIC --

It's either Boy or Addictions by doctor's diagnosis

#40 Feb 25th, 9:18am . Edited Feb 25th, 9:18am
Silv3rDr34mS
Jumping into the fray, I did 'Boy' by doctor's diagnosis. Great poem!

Authenticity (http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2231621/1/Authenticity), pretty please?

#41 Feb 25th, 2:20pm
Sanity's Brink
I reviewed "Authenticity" (nice poem)

please review "Just for you" thanks

#42 Feb 25th, 2:47pm . Edited Feb 25th, 4:12pm
writingxonxwalls
Reviewed "Just for You". (Fantastic job)

Could someone please review "She's Third"?

Thanks so much!

--WxOxW

#43 Feb 25th, 6:18pm
simpleplan13
I reviewed She's third.. could someone review My Prince? please and thank you.
#44 Feb 25th, 8:27pm
iloveanimecartoons
I reviewed 'But' One word--WOWNESS!

Can someone please review 'Love’s Messing with My Mind'? It's the first poem in my 'I Used to Be An ANGRY Poet' collection

#45 Feb 26th, 11:50am . Edited Feb 26th, 11:54am
simpleplan13
--OFF TOPIC--

I appreciate your review (and Ill return the favor) but you have to review the piece the author asks for if they specify s piece...

-- END OF OFF TOPIC --

My piece My Prince (link above) up again...

#46 Feb 26th, 4:13pm
iloveanimecartoons
My apologies. I misunderstood the rules. After I finish my chapter and send it to my beta, I'll start on your fic. :)

-ilac

#47 Feb 27th, 12:44pm
iloveanimecartoons
Okay, I read 'My Prince' and...wow! Just...I have no more words, honey. Go to your review 'cause I'm spent. LOL!

Can someone please review 'This Guy I Know'? Thankies! ;)

#48 Feb 27th, 12:55pm
writingxonxwalls
Reviewed 'This Guy I Know' =)

Could someone please review 'Crayons', 'She's Third', or 'If He Knew'? (Haha, gave you some variety!)

Thanks so much!!

-WxOxW

#49 Feb 27th, 4:41pm
Silv3rDr34mS
Reviewed 'If I Knew' - very nice. =)

Could someone review Carnivorous Shadows please? Thanks!

~lime

#50 Feb 27th, 5:41pm


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