This is the place to come if you want reviews for a poem, and the review type is "easy fix", aka a simple review.

For Review Game rules and some fun facts, go to "Read this first!".

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Moving on, this is the basic structure of the Review Game:

Person 1 says: Review "My Lucky Dream"!

Person 2 says: Ok, I reviewed "My Lucky Dream", ch 2. So can the next person please review "Stereotypes" or "Window"?

Person 3 says: Done (I did "Window" chapter 4), so can the next person review "Stranger"? Thanks.

This means the first one to post here doesn't have to review another person. Aka, first to come gets a freebie. So, hurry!

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For Poem Easy Fix, your review needs to fulfill these requirements, otherwise you will not be seen as someone who has fulfilled their obligation and you can thus not participate.

REVIEW REQUIREMENTS:

You need to state one thing you liked and *why*, and one thing you didn't like/could be improved, and *why*. Giving more feedback is not prohibited, but giving less than this is. Flaming is also prohibited. Being constructive is not.

If you absolutely can only find good or less good things to say, then please state two things you liked and *why*, or two things you didn't like and *why*. The review will be seen as invalid otherwise.

Restating the same thing does not count as a why. "I really enjoyed the piece because I thought it was very enjoyable" does not count as a why. "I really enjoyed the piece. It was enjoyable because the subject was relateable" does count as a why.

Phrases like "no mistakes" or "good job" do not count as a like. If you cannot find a dislike then write another distinct like do not say "there are no mistakes." That will not count. Saying "good job" or other similar phrases will not count as a like on a piece either. It is not specific.

Here are templates to ensure your review clearly fulfills the qualifications, you can use any of them if you choose, but they are not required:

1) I liked... because.... I disliked... because...

2) I liked... because... I liked... because...

3)I disliked... because... I disliked... because...

If you are still unsure on how the review requirement for Easy Fix is viewed, look at this post for guidance.

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LET THE GAMES BEGIN!

just posted "a self tour" and would appreciate someone taking a look. :) thanks!

-Lefty

Someone please review Shadows

=)

Could someone please review "If He Knew" or "Fairytale"? Thanks so much!

-WxOxW

can sombody come review "You Captured My Heart"?

thanks

~angel953

Could somebody review either "Dawn," "Give Me A Rose," or "I Told Myself"? thanks.

@Sanity's Brink: If you don't think I did good enough on the review bc I couldn't find something I didn't like, I would be glad to review something else. Just let me know and I'll get right on it.

As for my work, can somone please R&R either "I Love You, And That Will Never Change", "Mistake", or "Hero"?

thanks

~angel953

Can someone plz R&R "But It's Never Enough"?

Thanks

~angel953

Great job angel953! =)

You can review whatever you please.

--WxOxW

can someone plz R&R "Summer" or "Wedge"?

@WxOxW: thanks for the kind words and the review!!

thanks

~angel953

Please review "I Trusted You" or "Hidden Plea"? Thank you so much!

Angel953-- Anytime! And same for you reviewing my stories!

--WxOxW

Thanks

~angel953

awesome poem

=)

Could someone please review "Hidden Plea" or "The Art of Being Rejected"? Thanks so much!

--WxOxW

Can someone plz review either "Time" or "No Good Friend"?

Thanks

~angel953

Can someone review "No Good Friend"?

Thanks

~angel953

Can someone review for me?

Whichever suits your fancy.

Thanks so much!

--WxOxW

Could someone review either "Make The Most Of The Inevitable", or "GoodBye"?

Thanks

~angel953

One of my "A Hard Holiday" poems (I have four - any one would be great), please.

Thanks!

Can someone please review "Make The Most Of The Inevitable"?

Thanks

~angel953

Could someone review "Returning the Favor"? thanks.

Any of my "A Hard Holiday" poems, please.

Thanks.

Could someone please review "Hang the Memories Up My Wall" please? Thank you!

I know my concrit sounded a little strong, but I'd rather get a review telling me what to do better next time than something like "omg!!!11 that's so good/bad i loved/hated it!!!11"

why did you love/hate it?

Trust me, you are not bad.

Could someone review Little Vampires (http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2478980/1/) for me?

Or if you know, cutting really isn't your thing, I'll See You Again (http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2477668/1/) would be nice.

:)

Cheers,

Rachel.

One of the "A Hard Holiday" poems, please.

Thanks!

since "leave/stay/wander?" is sadly unloved, i'd appreciate if someone could review that one- or "new age (saint) valentine".

thanks so much!

Loved the format!!

Could someone please review something of mine?

It doesn't matter, whichever suits your fancy.

Thanks so much!!

-WxOxW

Good write, indeed.

Could someone do Boy?

Sorry about the whole repeating review thing.

So could someone do Boy or Addictions?

@doctor's diagnosis : if you and the person above you reviewed the same thing, you should follow Rule 10 in the Read This First! topic. It deals with this issue.

So, by following that, ilovetheopera should do a make-up review to writingxonxwalls , while the next participant reviews you.

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Story to review: Boy or Addictions by doctor's diagnosis

sorry about the mix up, hope i did the correct thing!

Yes, you did your make-up review, so all is good. Now,next time you post in a RG that is not about that you are playing, put it like I do, in an off topic place, and then state who is up for reviewing. Yeah, that's actually a rule :P (the last rule, I believe)

-- END OF OFF TOPIC --

It's either Boy or Addictions by doctor's diagnosis

Authenticity (http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2231621/1/Authenticity), pretty please?

please review "Just for you" thanks

Could someone please review "She's Third"?

Thanks so much!

--WxOxW

Can someone please review 'Love’s Messing with My Mind'? It's the first poem in my 'I Used to Be An ANGRY Poet' collection

I appreciate your review (and Ill return the favor) but you have to review the piece the author asks for if they specify s piece...

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My piece My Prince (link above) up again...

-ilac

Can someone please review 'This Guy I Know'? Thankies! ;)

Could someone please review 'Crayons', 'She's Third', or 'If He Knew'? (Haha, gave you some variety!)

Thanks so much!!

-WxOxW

Could someone review Carnivorous Shadows please? Thanks!

~lime

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